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Well, here is part 11. This was somewhat hard to do, mainly because i had SO many ideas on what would happen. i was going to have him have a dream sequence with a butload of forshadowing thrown in, but i didnt want forshadow stuff that might not even end up in the story, like i might forshadow something, then decide to drop the idea that it was based on, if you know what i mean. but yes, titan now has poor depth-perception. i wish i could have worded some things differently but i guess i am just like other writers: i see flaws that you do not.
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My dear friend this is wonderful, i was wondering how Yakone explained Daishi's presence to John considering she is a wolf but it isn't essential for the story. I love how John will believe anything. Titan will just have to be careful not to face plant himself into things for a while until he calculate around the depth issue. Sorry i wasn't around to see this when it first came out and I'm off again shortly too. Having a busy weekend. Hey does this mean Daishi and Titan might have pups at a later stage? and were there any survivors of Daishi's pack? anyhow I love this story and really enjoy how you present it. Have a great doy/night *hugs*
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