![Click to change the View [Animation] [VR 360] The Maw](http://d.furaffinity.net/art/shaybecke/1537916902/1537916902.shaybecke_0001.jpg)
Here's the animation I was working on ^-^ and heres the link!: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lNbq3DxWdbM
Make sure you change the quality to the highest!
This was meant to be an environment you can relax in, but with the toungue movements, it might not be that relaxing xP hehe, though I hope you enjoy it anyways! Lemme know what you think ^_^
Make sure you change the quality to the highest!
This was meant to be an environment you can relax in, but with the toungue movements, it might not be that relaxing xP hehe, though I hope you enjoy it anyways! Lemme know what you think ^_^
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That was certainly amazing, Shay! The movements, the sound design...I loved the breathing and the gentle wet sounds. It was utterly perfect. My only critique is about the flemlings. The little stands of spit. They look a little too...static. Or like pillars of seethru rubber that simply bounced up and down as the tongue and jaw moved about. Obviously, getting normal and fluid like saliva strands in something like this probably is next to impossible. But I'd suggest making them a little be thinner maybe, but keeping them thick at the top. And, if it's possible, having them flex sorta. Swinging back and forth as the breath is blown out and sucked in. They still looked freaking great, of course! And maybe I'm just being an idiot about this. Regardless, fantastic work! Keep it up!
Thank you! ^-^ and nah! Your right, it doesnt look that realistic xP the things you suggested would work very well, but unsure how to do that quite yet easily in a good enough timespan for it to be worth it xD but if I ever remade this, yeah id want to learn to make that better. Having them flex and be thinner would make them look soo much more realistic ^_^ Thank you for the feedback!
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