The picture is quite colorful and dynamic as it features all the characters.Your talent and potential are boundless. All of your works are infused with a really nice playful quality to them that just makes one smile. In this picture, Mia is a very interesting trainer character and her Pokemon are interesting and full of life as well. I particularly like how Sparks the Pikachu leaps up in a cheer, and Sapphi's playful expression is great as well. Other than that the only advice I can give is to keep on drawing and refining your proportions on the characters. There are plenty of great figure drawing books that can help, such as those by Byrne Hogarth, and the 'How to Draw Manga' books ( The real translated Japanese books, not the ones that you see on the shelves by Christopher Hart, etc. You can tell by the quality of the artwork inside. ) For animals, 'How to Draw Animals' by Jack Hamm ( The yellow one with the Lion raised up on its hind legs on the cover. ) is a great one that can help with the drawing of both regular animals and furry characters as well. Those can be found in the art book section of just about any bookstore or art store. Aside from looking at yourself in the mirror and trying out character poses, very well articulated dolls and action figures work as drawing manniquins as well (Plus in the case of the figures they look cool on your shelf when not posed in some spectacular fashion for your next work. ) . Hope this helps. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see more in the future!
--Onni

thanks for the advice onni, i will use it in future