"Varaha (Sanskrit: वराह) is the third Avatar of the Hindu god Vishnu, in the form of a Boar. He appeared in order to defeat Hiranyaksha, a demon who had taken the Earth (Prithvi) and carried it to the bottom of what is described as the cosmic ocean in the story. The battle between Varaha and Hiranyaksha is believed to have lasted for a thousand years, which the former finally won. Varaha carried the Earth out of the ocean between his tusks and restored it to its place in the universe. Vishnu married Prithvi (Bhudevi) in this avatar."
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Varaha
>Banishment of fear
>Protecting the world's ecology
>Intelligent use of the world's resources
>Freedom from the fear of dirt and darkness
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A late sketchbook commission from FC that I finally finished.
I was pretty happy with how the coloring turned out. It is the most work I have done with markers yet (with a tiny bit of colored pencil) and then I scanned it and...
Crap. It looks like crap. All the color changes and subtle details gone. Why do i bother doing real media again? Oh well. *uploads*
Edit: oops...Hey Smart Snark...just so you know, I agree with you guys on all points. :3 I sketched and inked this at the con and my con work is never...as good as I'd like it to be. The wonky anatomy/terrible perspective bugged me the whole time I was coloring it.
The scene is supposed to be on some celestial plain near the edge of the cosmic ocean. The image I was supplied with shows the avatar in a field lotus blossoms, so I wanted a sort of never where feel to it, hence the lotus going off into oblivion and the water of the lotus field turning into stars. At least, I tried to make it kinda cool. :/
If you have any critiques, please feel free to leave them here!
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Varaha
>Banishment of fear
>Protecting the world's ecology
>Intelligent use of the world's resources
>Freedom from the fear of dirt and darkness
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A late sketchbook commission from FC that I finally finished.
I was pretty happy with how the coloring turned out. It is the most work I have done with markers yet (with a tiny bit of colored pencil) and then I scanned it and...
Crap. It looks like crap. All the color changes and subtle details gone. Why do i bother doing real media again? Oh well. *uploads*
Edit: oops...Hey Smart Snark...just so you know, I agree with you guys on all points. :3 I sketched and inked this at the con and my con work is never...as good as I'd like it to be. The wonky anatomy/terrible perspective bugged me the whole time I was coloring it.
The scene is supposed to be on some celestial plain near the edge of the cosmic ocean. The image I was supplied with shows the avatar in a field lotus blossoms, so I wanted a sort of never where feel to it, hence the lotus going off into oblivion and the water of the lotus field turning into stars. At least, I tried to make it kinda cool. :/
If you have any critiques, please feel free to leave them here!
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I love Islamic inspired art <3
This is lovely... so amazing.
Brilliant as ever <3
Also... I love your real media work!
And, I came in just to comment about discworldiness. So. Um.
Instead I'll just say, DAMN fine art.
(My art concentration is Indian/Hindu art, especially of the gods and of the people.)
Gorgeous, really. : D
First of all, the marker rendering is absolutely stunning! I wish like crazy I was that talented with real media, especially something as unforgiving as markers.
But I'm really confused about what's happening to its back end. Is it.. flying through space..? Were you going for a "leaping out at the viewer" perspective? If so it's not working. The torso is almost the same size and shape as the head, just not as detailed. It's almost like a fuzzy cone-shaped hat. :s Perhaps make the shading under his chest/belly a little darker so it doesn't look as flat? Next time try to capture a little more movement in the animal's body. If this thing is flying through space, he should have a little more curve in his back instead of being so stiff, like he was shot out of a cannon. I know boars are pretty stocky and strong, but for sake of the image's flow, don't be afraid to bend the anatomy a little bit. It's an exciting scene! Let the character show it! :D
As far as the head, his eyes and fur are absolutely gorgeous! But the mouth is a little confusing. I'm not an expert on boars but don't they have more teeth than that? Also his bottom tusks seem unevenly placed, or perhaps the perspective on the closest one is skewed.
The background is just so beautiful and I like the transition between the lotuses and sky/sea, but that one random shell is... distracting. It's not really colored/shaded the same way as everything else so it's just kinda out there. With the way it's positioned it almost looks like it's stabbing him in the arm. D: I'm glad you didn't color his other hoof and let it be part of the water, otherwise the brown in the middle of all that blue would've been too distracting. It's like he's flowing into the sea, which works very well for this story.
Overall the coloring is BEAUTIFUL and you are extremely talented with markers, miss! The animal anatomy and perspective just needs a little more work. Really cool interpretation of this god, I love the story behind the image. :3
Oh perspective. That is something I am battling right now with another piece (http://conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=165465) and I think the issue of the back big too straight is still present. All I see with this boar is how long the body is and how the tail comes out of the wrong spot and ugh...I could go on and on. It really bugged me when I was coloring it so I did the best I could do with the markers. I got to use MAGENTA. I never get to use magenta!
The shell? I still like the concept, bad execution.Its supposed to be floating along with the avatar, but you are right, it's stabbing him. :C
Thank you again for taking the time to write a thoughtful critique. It's much appreciated here!
Rush jobs happen, it's just part of the art business. I wish we could all spend as much time was we wanted to finish a piece but alas. D: But for the lack of sleep/incoming deadline I think you did pretty well. Real media is especially so difficult under those conditions ugh. I'm scared to death of real media so what you've managed to do is still so impressive. Me, I need ctrl-z lol. MAGENTA IS AWESOME BY THE WAY and I would use it all the time if I could. XD
I like the shell concept too - the idea of transitioning from a field of lotuses to a cosmic sea is really cool, and I see how you were trying to mesh the ideas of universe + ocean. But yeah the placement is what makes it distracting.
It doesn't belong in your scraps.
:(