This particular chapter took way longer than planned. It also ended up way longer than planned. Had i not chosen to split this chapter and the previous section up, it would have totaled over sixty pages. As for why it took so long, well, that's a combination of health reasons and how much work I did on this chapter (as well as my proofreaders) coupled with the importance of just how I wanted this chapter to read. I've received a lot of feedback in regards to Yuri. About how he was irredeemable, unrepentant, and just the most unlikable SOB in the entire story. Even more so than Dorian or Ana (granted she got one scene). The goal from the start was never to make him do a complete 360 and suddenly become this likable, friendly character. Really I just wanted to explore why he is the way he is, and maybe open up the path for Yuri and Vernon to at least grow to tolerate one another.
I wanted to try and adequately try to explain why Yuri is the way he is, and acts the way he does. And much like Dawn, major growth takes time. And that's the reason this chapter had been mostly done a week ago, and I spent the extra time agonizing over it and sharing it with my backers and revising again in order to try to make sure it came out right. But there comes a time where you have to say 'I've done all I can do'. If I just keep editing this chapter again and again LAW will never end. So here it is, the Yuri chapter.

Also, quick update on my health, I have to go in for a surgical consultation this week. I'm not sure if it's about the guided injection, or if the surgeon just thinks it's time to move forward with surgery. I'll have more details on my Dawn Blog as the situation develops...

http://askdawnandvern.tumblr.com/
I'm more prone to updating that than my journal here.

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