Very nice. Although the imagery is rather horrid, the rhyme gives the verses certain lightheartedness. Enjoyable, I actually read these out loud to get all out of the rhythm and rhyme. Not so sure what makes you write poems about golems and clockwork foxes... but I sort of liked these. Very nice little piece, I enjoyed reading these. Great work.

The imagery grows out of a steampunk role play character of mine that has sort of taken root in my brain and is fast developing a back story ... though the "mainspring wound too tight" verse was inspired by a particularly teeth-grinding day at work :) Your time and comments are, as always, appreciated.

I liked that very much...

*hugs....

V.

Thank you for your time, dear vixyy, and your fav. Glad you liked it :)