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Welp! It seems it took me more than a month to post this page since the last one, sorry about that! In any case, it's finally here, and I should be able to post regularly for a couple weeks now.
I finally changed the text font, since many people found it hard to read, and reuploaded the old pages as well. I also retouched them to make the colors a bit more vibrant.
In case you are wondering, the cult of Estàr is the state religion of the Laatvian Empire, and it's usually imposed on conquered lands (even though in some instances other faiths are tolerated). Estàr or Eshtàr is the creator god, often associated with the sun and fire (Estàr literally means "sun" in ancient Laatvian), protector of humankind and constantly in battle with the demon Cahrìr, the Black Raven, symbol of chaos and death. According to the official cult of Estàr, also called Church of the Holy Sun or Holy Flame, non-human races were created by Cahrìr to destroy humankind, and as such they are seen as inferior.
Joachim, however, belongs to an heretic denomination of the church, and believes these doctrines were introduced solely as an excuse to exploit other races, and that every sentient creature deserves equal respect and dignity.
Sorry for the small religion lesson, I plan to write more about my world's religion in the future. Anyways, I hope you liked the page, the next one will be up quite soon. ^^
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Welp! It seems it took me more than a month to post this page since the last one, sorry about that! In any case, it's finally here, and I should be able to post regularly for a couple weeks now.
I finally changed the text font, since many people found it hard to read, and reuploaded the old pages as well. I also retouched them to make the colors a bit more vibrant.
In case you are wondering, the cult of Estàr is the state religion of the Laatvian Empire, and it's usually imposed on conquered lands (even though in some instances other faiths are tolerated). Estàr or Eshtàr is the creator god, often associated with the sun and fire (Estàr literally means "sun" in ancient Laatvian), protector of humankind and constantly in battle with the demon Cahrìr, the Black Raven, symbol of chaos and death. According to the official cult of Estàr, also called Church of the Holy Sun or Holy Flame, non-human races were created by Cahrìr to destroy humankind, and as such they are seen as inferior.
Joachim, however, belongs to an heretic denomination of the church, and believes these doctrines were introduced solely as an excuse to exploit other races, and that every sentient creature deserves equal respect and dignity.
Sorry for the small religion lesson, I plan to write more about my world's religion in the future. Anyways, I hope you liked the page, the next one will be up quite soon. ^^
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Never apologize for this Mr 0Laffson! Each panel is like a beautiful painting, full of details and beautifully colored.
I don’t mind waiting even if it took you few month's to do just one page. The quality of your comic is amazing. ^w^
You have my unending thanks’ for all your hard work, effort and time that you sacrificed for this project. ÓwÓ
Its thanks’ to your courtesy that we are able to see the results of your training. Polishing your drawing style into a gem that it is right now.
I don’t mind waiting even if it took you few month's to do just one page. The quality of your comic is amazing. ^w^
You have my unending thanks’ for all your hard work, effort and time that you sacrificed for this project. ÓwÓ
Its thanks’ to your courtesy that we are able to see the results of your training. Polishing your drawing style into a gem that it is right now.
Oh, it's here, finally! Only 3 pics on page? A-a-ah, noooooo! I wanna moar! MOAR!! But the page is good as always. It is a little dissapointing that the story is given in such tiny pieces. It's not enough for my hunger for your art. But I know that you are busy. Post more soon, please! Give me Shadi! Quick! MOAR!
Just kidding :) Because I am excited. It sounds cool - a heretical priest, a tomboy thief and a one-handed blacksmith try to save the world.
Olaf, you made a text mistake, I suppose. Not "Syndacate" - "Syndicate". And the new text font looks better.
I have one idea for you. I hope that it would be possible when you'll end the comic. Do you like board games. I like'em a lot. What do you think about a board game based on your comic and universe? My idead is to make a strategy game about the Kings of Beggars. For two to four players who act as Kings controlling their territory, running illegal business, making alliances and fighting for influence. Bribes, drugs, slavery, bribes (moar!) and rivalry. I think it would be great. If it's possible in your canon and if you want to see a board game. I think that a game would help people to learn about you and your art. I mean, a player enjoys a cool and atmospheric game and later he realises that is based on a wonderful comic and rushes to read it. And becomes a new fan. And his friends who play with him would become fans too.
Just kidding :) Because I am excited. It sounds cool - a heretical priest, a tomboy thief and a one-handed blacksmith try to save the world.
Olaf, you made a text mistake, I suppose. Not "Syndacate" - "Syndicate". And the new text font looks better.
I have one idea for you. I hope that it would be possible when you'll end the comic. Do you like board games. I like'em a lot. What do you think about a board game based on your comic and universe? My idead is to make a strategy game about the Kings of Beggars. For two to four players who act as Kings controlling their territory, running illegal business, making alliances and fighting for influence. Bribes, drugs, slavery, bribes (moar!) and rivalry. I think it would be great. If it's possible in your canon and if you want to see a board game. I think that a game would help people to learn about you and your art. I mean, a player enjoys a cool and atmospheric game and later he realises that is based on a wonderful comic and rushes to read it. And becomes a new fan. And his friends who play with him would become fans too.
A lot of pages will be just with 3 panels, simply because my scanner is tiny! XD Drawing super small panels would make it very hard. Haha yep, even though in this story Kari will not be there.
Good catch! ^^ I corrected the typo now, thanks for pointing out.
I played D&D a bit, but I'm afraid I don't have much experience with boardgames. ^^ I guess it could be an interesting concept, though, once the comic is done I might consider it. It will take me years, however.
Good catch! ^^ I corrected the typo now, thanks for pointing out.
I played D&D a bit, but I'm afraid I don't have much experience with boardgames. ^^ I guess it could be an interesting concept, though, once the comic is done I might consider it. It will take me years, however.
Also, Olaf, I recommend you to work on Shadi's design and appearance before it is not too late. She is not recognised among other cats which is not good. It is clearly seen on the comic cover - there are three almost same cats and only blue eyes and the position is the centre of a page let the watcher suggest that it is the main character. It is important, work on it, please. We all know and love Shadi but new watchers of the comic may not recognise her in the crowd of other cats. I recommend you to think about other characters' appearance too to make them more rememberable
That's a good criticism, and something I've been thinking about for a long time. I decided to change her appearance a bit, and make her fur color darker. Together with her clothes and blue eyes, it should be enough. The two cats you noticed are the only two major characters who look kinda like her, the others will be different, with spots and resembling more lynxes.
Yep! And unfortunately dogma like that has been very common in history.
Luckily the monk lives far away from the capital (these lands you see in the comics are on a different continent, so they are far from the monarchs influences), and generally preaches within another more tolerant country. Now he travelled to Imperial lands to spread the word, but this is not his real home.
Luckily the monk lives far away from the capital (these lands you see in the comics are on a different continent, so they are far from the monarchs influences), and generally preaches within another more tolerant country. Now he travelled to Imperial lands to spread the word, but this is not his real home.
Sorry? On the contrary, I find it fascinating! I love your ideas and lore, and it was nice to read more into it here, in the info.
Oh, and super happy to see a new page, and that dwarf's armor and helmet are FANTASTIC! The helmet reminds me of some old Scandinavian, Saxon and Celtic helmets with faces, using brass or gold for beards, mustaches and eyebrows. <3 <3 <3
Oh, and super happy to see a new page, and that dwarf's armor and helmet are FANTASTIC! The helmet reminds me of some old Scandinavian, Saxon and Celtic helmets with faces, using brass or gold for beards, mustaches and eyebrows. <3 <3 <3
Well that look WAY cooler than most of the Thracian helmets I've seen. I think the Thracian horses were carnivorous horses of Diomedes, known to eat men, and were part of the labors of Hercules.
I think the nose guard, eyebrows, and facial hair, all add a very Scandinavian look to it, very beautiful. The rest of the armor, and outfits, all look fantastic, can't wait to see what you do next!
I think the nose guard, eyebrows, and facial hair, all add a very Scandinavian look to it, very beautiful. The rest of the armor, and outfits, all look fantastic, can't wait to see what you do next!
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