Hey, it's nice to see the finished version! I like the colour palette - the purple and orange is very Halloween-esque. I also like the orange highlight as it adds to the dark and dusky atmosphere. The poses look so much better, it's a lot more dynamic and the characters look like they're interacting with each other :D

P.S. I'm glad my advice helped you!

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I wanted to add a little more blue at the beginning but I was a little too late to do so. I'm still happy with how it turned out

You're welcome! I think the orange itself works better as to me it gives the drawing a warm and happy feeling. The bat's blue hair as well as her pink outfit is cool enough to balance out the warmth :)

Yep you're right. I thought more about adding some light blue to some of the shadows to give some vibrance to them ^^