to help out make sense of the seen.
in this test comic I failed to have a establishing shot of the canon the bad guy has.
the REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE it is powering up and shooting at the place the squirrel girl lives.
hope that kinda clears up what is going on in this page.
hope you ENjoy it^^
in this test comic I failed to have a establishing shot of the canon the bad guy has.
the REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE it is powering up and shooting at the place the squirrel girl lives.
hope that kinda clears up what is going on in this page.
hope you ENjoy it^^
Category All / Comics
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Size 900 x 1280px
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While you art is leagues better than mine. I do have a suggestion that may help clear up the confuse some.
If you add another panel next to 3 with the city in a crosshair/reticle then you can show the viewer the intent, similar to how it was viewed on the previous page. Adore your lines and coloring.
If you add another panel next to 3 with the city in a crosshair/reticle then you can show the viewer the intent, similar to how it was viewed on the previous page. Adore your lines and coloring.
I followed it after getting to the end and then re-reading, but I'm simply throwing my hat in from the artist's description:
"to help out make sense of the seen.
in this test comic I failed to have a establishing shot of the canon the bad guy has.
the REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE it is powering up and shooting at the place the squirrel girl lives.
hope that kinda clears up what is going on in this page."
"to help out make sense of the seen.
in this test comic I failed to have a establishing shot of the canon the bad guy has.
the REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE it is powering up and shooting at the place the squirrel girl lives.
hope that kinda clears up what is going on in this page."
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