Lovely!
There's a rift inside of me that is stuck deciding if Suz would have a stubby small tail or just be bare like she most likely is here, still, you made her look amazingly fleshed-out and well proportioned!

I know some people light find her character development clishe and overdone, but i like her because she has a character design that is solid, and i am awaiting to know if she does break that mold in the future!

I honestly don't mind her cliche aspects, because it's a trope I personally haven't seen in a long time, and admittedly, I watch a lot of moves. Sure the 'mean girl' trope is an overused one, but her specific type of mean girl is closer to a trope you see with boys more than girls, being that she is a poor, disheveled girl who pushes people away with violence and eventually starts to crack because someone gives her the attention and admiration she deserves. If in the full game, the developer told us that Susie was poor, grew up in a rough part of town (or even outside of town in like the woods or something), and was even emotionally abused by her parents or siblings, I'd believe it. As tropey as that is, it's real and I definitely went through it myself growing up.

Aaah, I'm rambling again. I promised myself I'd stop doing that in comments. :P
Thanks for the compliments! I hope to make a 'fixed' version of this soon, because I've spent more time looking at her sprites and want to change a few things.

This would be a great reference drawing for others to use of her.

Once I come around to updating some of the mistakes I made (I didn't have enough references from the game at the time), I wouldn't mind if people wanted to use it as a reference. I'd like to change the strip of spikes on her vest to an actual arm band like in her attack animations, maybe extend the length of her vest a bit more, and add in the freckles we see in her talk sprites.

I can't wait for the rest of the game to come out.