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Darien's Gap - Chapter Five
by Cirrel
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16 years ago
Goddess of Change
Nohni's getting some answers finally.
Unfortunately they do not bode well.
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Nohni's getting some answers finally.
Unfortunately they do not bode well.
HTML Version at: http://www.wilderhom.com/dariensgap.....riensgap05.htm
Chapter Navigation: <<< PREV | FIRST | NEXT >>>
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One typo I noticed.
"He speaks it well enough," grumbled Carlos. "Not all tribes in Daria are as isolated as mine…was." Carlos literally spat out the last word."
Extra set of closing quotation marks at the end of the sentence.
Love the setting and mystery so far, C.
TM