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So, uh...
Ended up doing another one of these on the same day.
Just felt like I hadn't used up my creative energy for the day so I decided to at least start on the next one, get a good head start on it for the next day.
Then I ended up finishing it, heh.
I've uploaded a "Secret Note" to my scraps that contains an adult continuation to one of these stories, only because I couldn't resist the pun but couldn't explore it without leaving SFW territory.
So... I did :)
Anyways, please enjoy!
Many thanks to
techdragon for his assistance!
All characters © Activision, made by Insomniac, redesigned by Toys for Bob
If you enjoy my work, consider buying me a coffee at Ko-fi!
Ended up doing another one of these on the same day.
Just felt like I hadn't used up my creative energy for the day so I decided to at least start on the next one, get a good head start on it for the next day.
Then I ended up finishing it, heh.
I've uploaded a "Secret Note" to my scraps that contains an adult continuation to one of these stories, only because I couldn't resist the pun but couldn't explore it without leaving SFW territory.
So... I did :)
Anyways, please enjoy!
Many thanks to
techdragon for his assistance!All characters © Activision, made by Insomniac, redesigned by Toys for Bob
If you enjoy my work, consider buying me a coffee at Ko-fi!
Category Story / Bondage
Species Western Dragon
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 26.9 kB
Listed in Folders
Hehehe. Believe it or not, the Peace Keepers have been, so far, my least favorite clan to work with.
Not because they lack potential, but being an entire clan of warriors, I couldn't justify a theme other than warfare for them - which ended up making everything sort of more homogenous than the Artisans.
Not necessarily a bad thing, but there wasn't as much room for variety as I'd like.
The Magic Crafters, however, are gonna go right back to variety ^_^
Not because they lack potential, but being an entire clan of warriors, I couldn't justify a theme other than warfare for them - which ended up making everything sort of more homogenous than the Artisans.
Not necessarily a bad thing, but there wasn't as much room for variety as I'd like.
The Magic Crafters, however, are gonna go right back to variety ^_^
Enjoyed both of these compilations so far (and that "secret note" was a nice touch~) and I look forward to seeing more of these little viginette compilations in the future. Spyro's universe really does have a lot of untapped potential for tickle-themed hijinks and I'm interested in what you have for the Magic Crafters in particular.~
Really amazing collection of stories! The overall idea is very ambitious too, and worked out really well. I love the idea of kingdoms getting overrun and falling in humiliating ways, so having all of these mighty dragons getting overpowered, by inferior minions and tied up and tickled in their own unique way is just awesome. Especially that transition of a big, powerful dragon into a helpless begging captive because of a few tickles to his sensitive soles
I greatly enjoyed this too! See my comment on the previous piece for my overall thoughts on this method of brief story telling. I quite enjoy it - the challenge of properly establishing your scene in a short period is not trivial.
If I could offer a minor bit of criticism that I intend to be constructive - on this piece, many of your shorts begin with the name of the central character. If this is consistent across many pieces, it can get a bit repetitive.
My personal thought is this: if we do not yet have a good image of who and what a character is, beginning with a description before a name is much more concrete and less abstract, and makes it easier to identify with a character. Even if we do know who it is, varying paragraph intros will make a stronger and more engaging piece.
All of that said, I still greatly enjoy your writing, and I would love to see more from you, both long-form and shorts like these. :3
If I could offer a minor bit of criticism that I intend to be constructive - on this piece, many of your shorts begin with the name of the central character. If this is consistent across many pieces, it can get a bit repetitive.
My personal thought is this: if we do not yet have a good image of who and what a character is, beginning with a description before a name is much more concrete and less abstract, and makes it easier to identify with a character. Even if we do know who it is, varying paragraph intros will make a stronger and more engaging piece.
All of that said, I still greatly enjoy your writing, and I would love to see more from you, both long-form and shorts like these. :3
I understand where your criticism is coming from, and ordinarily, I would agree
However, a counterpoint - I also wanted the titles to be markers to make it easy to find, say, a specific dragon :) And since the short stories are very character-centric, with pre-existing characters no less, I do want them to be featured and descriptive.
If I was writing more full-fledged stories, though, I would absolutely rely less on character names in the titles, as then I'd have room to actually set up the character in more depth.
However, a counterpoint - I also wanted the titles to be markers to make it easy to find, say, a specific dragon :) And since the short stories are very character-centric, with pre-existing characters no less, I do want them to be featured and descriptive.
If I was writing more full-fledged stories, though, I would absolutely rely less on character names in the titles, as then I'd have room to actually set up the character in more depth.
I knew someone would do stuff tickling the elder dragons since they're all got unique designs but you're doing great by getting all from each world can't wait for the next one ^^
I've got a question you did say that you would cover the dragons in Gnasty's World too but some of them there are repeats from some seen before so what will you do about that? Will the repeats just have to go through another round of it maybe more tickly than the last?
I've got a question you did say that you would cover the dragons in Gnasty's World too but some of them there are repeats from some seen before so what will you do about that? Will the repeats just have to go through another round of it maybe more tickly than the last?
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