I love scientific things! Even with dragons...
I will download it and read it. I shall tell you what I think.

The scientific part is only at the end on this one, and I was worried people would take it for something different than what it is. Which is pretty much an explination of why Razor is lonely.

Later I will be explaining how their flight muscles, and their fire breath works.

I have noticed that, by reading your story completely. It´s very complete in information, and I have some questions to make to you because of that. There is some advices I want to give you as well, like the grammar. I will make a list of questions and I shall ask you.
However, this story is very cool. You are a good writer, don´t forget to keep practicing!

The grammar and such is something I know about, and I'm realy working on it.
I have mild dyslexia dysgraphia, so I have to check and re-check my spelling and grammar.
I will be running stuff through an editor when I build my web site.

If you have questions, I'll be glad to answer them, and suggestions are welcome too ^.=.^

I know what you mean, it is enough explanation for me. Anyway, I cheer you up to improve your grammar and spelling!
You are going to do a WebSite? Cool, can´t wait to see it... XD
And about the questions and suggestions that I can send you, I will bear it in mind.
Now, is it possible that Razor can do something about his tendons?

Razor's tendons are his structural limit, unfortunately he simply can't do anything to make them stronger.

While doing research I found out how tendons effect the power a muscle can transmit to the bone, It's possible to train up stronger tendons, but it's still got limitations. Razor is pretty much at the limits of his development, his tendons can't get any stronger because the fibers would need to be larger, and they can't grow larger than they already are.

Poor Razor, really. Well, he seems to live with that without complain, eh?
That explanation about the tendons is pretty interesting, I didn´t know about it and now I do!
Another question, how long can Razor and the other dragons, in your story, live? I enjoy the longevity of this creatures.

Most dragons in my story are expected to live around a hundred to a hundred and ten years, I like the idea of dragons living a long time, but I've decided to stick with a semi-realistic concept. That means they won't live much over a hundred years.

Razor might not even live that long, I'm not even considering killing him at the end of the story. But despite his incredible physical condition, he's been through alot, and there are things that where done to him that haven't helped him. He's got alot of scars, both physical and mental. On top of that he was used as a test subject in a number of experiments, because of his special genetics it was thought they could "extract" that part and make more titan dragons. Instead they messed up his brain chemistry, he needs injections every day so he doesn't die.

I plan on writing more about this stuff, but if you have anymore questions feel free to ask.

Wow! I´m really interested about that concept. It´s a very good one, and every dragon-fan has its own. I, for example, consider that they keep living after "dying" as dragons made of pure spiritual energy... Never mind, 'nuff said.
Razor's life is very sad, even about the experiments. Of course, dragons have a very high strength within. And he is not the exception to the rule!
About your next stuff, I´ll be waiting for it without trouble. You are a cool genius, I think indeed.

I approve your science, very sound developed character and species.

Thanks, I've been working on this stuff for a long time, going on about ten years soon.

I respect that a lot, shows great perseverance, I have a work myself that has been ten years in the making thus far as well.