
Alright, so after my cousin gave me his old laptop setup, I realized he had left all his old art software on it. I took it as a sign and decided to try my hand at more art. This is the result and it took me 2 weeks to do. 2 FREAKIN' WEEKS! However, I think it's a nice change of pace from the dramatic/emo pictures I've been drawing and I really like how it came out. :P
The text is from one of my poems that I'm trying to turn into a song. You can find the original here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2331777
Art and Poem by Myself
The text is from one of my poems that I'm trying to turn into a song. You can find the original here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2331777
Art and Poem by Myself
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 720px
File Size 721.4 kB
Wow. I can honestly say I'm impressed. For not having help at all, you incredibly well. You lines are decent (A littke thick in places, but who am I to complain? :P), and colors are well done, the words are beautiful, and I like how you made it feel like the candle was closer than the two furres. You also did well with the scale textures. :)
Here's what I found that i think you can improve on:
-With a light source as close at as that candle probably is, the shadows could be more defined, as well as the lighting. I'll let you borrow my camera so you can play with light sources and such.
-You can see the lines where the scales texture ends and starts in their blocks. Next time you might want to try erasing the edges of the image you're using for texture.
-The nipple positioning of Bengali feels a bit off, but that just might be how his body is angled. That's a difficult angle to work with and I'm surprised that you pulled it off as well as you did.
-The far arm feels like it just disappears into nothingness.
Other than that, I think did an incredible job (Holy crap, did you actually put a reflection of the flame in his eye? 8D). See? I've told you that you had the skills to become a decent artist, you should work at it more! It used to take me two weeks to pump out something like this with half the quality and now I can do something like this in the matter of 2 hours. It just takes practice. :P
Here's what I found that i think you can improve on:
-With a light source as close at as that candle probably is, the shadows could be more defined, as well as the lighting. I'll let you borrow my camera so you can play with light sources and such.
-You can see the lines where the scales texture ends and starts in their blocks. Next time you might want to try erasing the edges of the image you're using for texture.
-The nipple positioning of Bengali feels a bit off, but that just might be how his body is angled. That's a difficult angle to work with and I'm surprised that you pulled it off as well as you did.
-The far arm feels like it just disappears into nothingness.
Other than that, I think did an incredible job (Holy crap, did you actually put a reflection of the flame in his eye? 8D). See? I've told you that you had the skills to become a decent artist, you should work at it more! It used to take me two weeks to pump out something like this with half the quality and now I can do something like this in the matter of 2 hours. It just takes practice. :P
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