The second short story from the Anasian Universe (my furry sci-fi universe). This one is quite a bit longer than the first short story, Infection, found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/26816500/.
Substantially different in scope than Infection, A Movable Fortress deals with the struggles of Frederik Azimar, a wolf who is also an interstellar corporate mogul. Frederik has made a highly profitable "deal with the devil", the devil in this case being Zenin Binot, a deadly and cruel lion who is notorious among the crime syndicates of the Anasian Confederation. Azimar's business is in the manufacture of hollowed-out dwarf planets for rich clientele, providing them with a nearly-indestructible and personalized environment, akin to the rich purchasing a private island on 21st century Earth.
Desiring to constantly one-up his competitor, Marva Pletokaar, Azimar takes this risky and possibly illegal contract to profit heavily and retire to his own private paradise world. However, when mysterious billion-year-old ruins are found inside the dwarf planet that is chosen for Zenin, everything begins to fall apart, including Frederik...
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Substantially different in scope than Infection, A Movable Fortress deals with the struggles of Frederik Azimar, a wolf who is also an interstellar corporate mogul. Frederik has made a highly profitable "deal with the devil", the devil in this case being Zenin Binot, a deadly and cruel lion who is notorious among the crime syndicates of the Anasian Confederation. Azimar's business is in the manufacture of hollowed-out dwarf planets for rich clientele, providing them with a nearly-indestructible and personalized environment, akin to the rich purchasing a private island on 21st century Earth.
Desiring to constantly one-up his competitor, Marva Pletokaar, Azimar takes this risky and possibly illegal contract to profit heavily and retire to his own private paradise world. However, when mysterious billion-year-old ruins are found inside the dwarf planet that is chosen for Zenin, everything begins to fall apart, including Frederik...
If you like this, or anything else in the Anasian Universe, please consider helping me out on Patreon so I can continue creating more. Thank you! https://www.patreon.com/anasianuniverse
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I have some questions about this scene from your story:
"A couple of tears finally began to fall down his long muzzle."
1. When Frederik cried, did his tears specifically fall down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and off the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and off his lower jaw and chin
2. Exactly how would Frederik react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears falling down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Frederik's muzzle.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Frederik's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears falling down Frederik's muzzle?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
"A couple of tears finally began to fall down his long muzzle."
1. When Frederik cried, did his tears specifically fall down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and off the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and off his lower jaw and chin
2. Exactly how would Frederik react and what would he say to me if I hugged him, rubbed his back and licked those tears falling down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Frederik's muzzle.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Frederik's tears taste on my tongue if I licked them directly from his muzzle?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm were those tears falling down Frederik's muzzle?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
First off, thank you for reading and enjoying the story! I appreciate it a lot! ;3
Secondly, now that I have had some time to think about my response to your... unusual but interesting questions in regard to this story, I can give you a thorough answer like you asked. Now that I've had some time to think about it, here you go:
1. I don't know? I'll just say A., because it sounds more dramatic. ;3
2. In this particular scene, Tieravasi is present at her father's moment of great emotion, however, she would probably take some sort of offense to the act. Frederik, also being an interstellar corporate mogul, would probably not be too receptive to such a gesture, being very rigid and always under some sort of pressure. But, this doesn't mean that you can't fantasize, so feel free to imagine Frederik in whatever situation you wish. ;3
3. Ah, the fun part of the questions!... Anyway, at this time of Frederik's life, he is a pretty hardcore amphetamine addict. Being a interstellar asteroid mogul means that one is very busy and may need assistance in the ungodly amount of things that they have to do. So he would be very dehydrated at this point, and full of a ridiculous amount of his "medication". This would make his tears very, very salty, so let's say maybe an 8.5 on the CanzetYote2 Salt Scale. Additionally, the acute amount of amphetamine salts coursing through his highly addicted veins would leave a distinct and acridly bitter flavor to those tears. It would be akin to crushing an Adderall pill in a bit of salty water, and sticking in the microwave for about 15 seconds. Maybe not the most appetizing thing out there, but that's just me. :3
4. Well, in reference to the answer of your previous query, due to Frederik's pill habit, his body temperature would be quite high, due to the stimulant nature of his favorite drug. With an average person/furry being maybe a 6 on your scale, I'd say they would be a 7.23175 on your scale, just to be precise.
And so, thank you again for you interest in the story! Your questions, while not ones that I was anticipating, have lead me to think about aspects of my work that I would not have otherwise considered. It's good to get out of your comfort zone from time to time, and I thank you for helping to nudge me just a little out of mine.
Please stay tuned for future stories, there will be some scenes that you may enjoy! :3
Secondly, now that I have had some time to think about my response to your... unusual but interesting questions in regard to this story, I can give you a thorough answer like you asked. Now that I've had some time to think about it, here you go:
1. I don't know? I'll just say A., because it sounds more dramatic. ;3
2. In this particular scene, Tieravasi is present at her father's moment of great emotion, however, she would probably take some sort of offense to the act. Frederik, also being an interstellar corporate mogul, would probably not be too receptive to such a gesture, being very rigid and always under some sort of pressure. But, this doesn't mean that you can't fantasize, so feel free to imagine Frederik in whatever situation you wish. ;3
3. Ah, the fun part of the questions!... Anyway, at this time of Frederik's life, he is a pretty hardcore amphetamine addict. Being a interstellar asteroid mogul means that one is very busy and may need assistance in the ungodly amount of things that they have to do. So he would be very dehydrated at this point, and full of a ridiculous amount of his "medication". This would make his tears very, very salty, so let's say maybe an 8.5 on the CanzetYote2 Salt Scale. Additionally, the acute amount of amphetamine salts coursing through his highly addicted veins would leave a distinct and acridly bitter flavor to those tears. It would be akin to crushing an Adderall pill in a bit of salty water, and sticking in the microwave for about 15 seconds. Maybe not the most appetizing thing out there, but that's just me. :3
4. Well, in reference to the answer of your previous query, due to Frederik's pill habit, his body temperature would be quite high, due to the stimulant nature of his favorite drug. With an average person/furry being maybe a 6 on your scale, I'd say they would be a 7.23175 on your scale, just to be precise.
And so, thank you again for you interest in the story! Your questions, while not ones that I was anticipating, have lead me to think about aspects of my work that I would not have otherwise considered. It's good to get out of your comfort zone from time to time, and I thank you for helping to nudge me just a little out of mine.
Please stay tuned for future stories, there will be some scenes that you may enjoy! :3
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