No worries. You will get hang of it.

thanks much^^

Buy, if you don't mind a suggestion of a beginner translator, I would say to you change the font you use.

font?

the name of the letters you use, for exemple: arial, times new roman and (urgh) comics san

oh

I am using times new roman letters

why should I change them?

Aesthetics mostly.

Nice touch, mirroring the visor display like that.

thanks much

it is interesting to look carefully if the physical elements I am drawing are correctly done

Again there's some nice details on this page, such as the insignia on the rider's sleeve in the second panel. I also see our careless and rude rider Geoffrey Mallone is a wanted criminal and unsavoury type so no real surprise he'd have little consideration for our cowboy. I have to agree with 2Kur0w about the mirroring of the visor display in the last panel, a very nice effect indeed.

thanks much

I wanted to portray this world as realistic as possible, and with insignia like that for different fractions like the police or other institutions, it looks more "lively"

and the mirroring on the visor I felt only natural, because it would be only realistic^^