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Five years after Humanity's induction into a galactic superpower, human colonization and expansion has led to some unexpected forms of cross-pollination.
New acts, coming from and inspired by the new human colonies, have caught the ears of a curious galactic public.
Sixth Eye: A two-piece composed only of a human bassist and ralai drummer, stand at ground zero of this new musical movement.
The afternoon following their biggest show yet, Sixth Eye are called back to home base for a meeting with their handlers.
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Five years after Humanity's induction into a galactic superpower, human colonization and expansion has led to some unexpected forms of cross-pollination.
New acts, coming from and inspired by the new human colonies, have caught the ears of a curious galactic public.
Sixth Eye: A two-piece composed only of a human bassist and ralai drummer, stand at ground zero of this new musical movement.
The afternoon following their biggest show yet, Sixth Eye are called back to home base for a meeting with their handlers.
Plain text version here: https://www.sofurry.com/view/1391958
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I had the exact same thought as Toby before he said, 'Hey! You just littered.' Made me laugh.
The camera's memory card was an interesting way to bring in that she's a half-breed instead of a real snow leopard. That was nicely done. You also brought with it a good few allussions to some bad blood and tragedy with her family, if I interpreted missing her sister dearly correctly. Cat needs a lupari in her life, methinks. But a human she wants to cuddle with is good too!
Cass and Endi were nice to see, especially nice to see the first named ashar character. Love the bluntness and honesty the rodents bring to the table. Plus, nicely augmented by Cass' jabs. Also always fun to see a new AI, and an asishi even.
I've no critique, it was a solid progression of the story and I'm eager to see more.
The camera's memory card was an interesting way to bring in that she's a half-breed instead of a real snow leopard. That was nicely done. You also brought with it a good few allussions to some bad blood and tragedy with her family, if I interpreted missing her sister dearly correctly. Cat needs a lupari in her life, methinks. But a human she wants to cuddle with is good too!
Cass and Endi were nice to see, especially nice to see the first named ashar character. Love the bluntness and honesty the rodents bring to the table. Plus, nicely augmented by Cass' jabs. Also always fun to see a new AI, and an asishi even.
I've no critique, it was a solid progression of the story and I'm eager to see more.
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