*standing ovation*

That was brilliant, both of you, absolutely brilliant!

Thank you my friend! I always appreciate your encouragement!

I read it over in Dearshul's page. The manuscript had multiple errors in grammar and some in spelling as well, but the overall style was good. One or two sentences might have been altered to give it more of a sense of action to smooth the exposition. As I said, still a solid piece overall. That being said, I was struck by a curious notion that I wanted to put past you. It wasn't quite the blaze that usually happens when I receive inspiration or insight, so I think this may just be me, but were Acrathia and her siblings ever once one entity?

Oh ha ha. Answered on Dearshul77's page. Thank you for your insight and encouragement as always Omni

Any failures when it comes to proofreading land squarely on my shoulders. That's what I get for trying to multitask! ^^ I'm sorry, Nerull

You two still did a pretty good job. Granted, I wonder about Imoldra. He's laid claim to a very large role in nature. For him to shoulder it alone boggles the mind. Especially since he seems to have held respect to Oberon and Titania. Granted, given his wild nature, the wild magic must be especially strong with him, and the wild magic is nothing to sniff at.

Do you feel that I have given him too much? I did not intend for him to have exclusive dominion over nature, just a large influence. It is a heavy responsibility to handle alone...that's why he has ravens

There are several other entities in myth and lore that have also had dominion over nature and the wilds. So to give him exclusive seems a bit much to me. Then again, this may be a fault Henry would have been tempted to point out in the wolf, and the Alpha does have to maintain superiority. So if it's a self-bestowed title, it may be acceptable, though a a whole, I don't think he can claim it in full truth and honesty.

Yeah I didn't want to imply that he was the only entity who presides over nature. His primary concern is the balance and protection of nature with emphasis on predatory animals preventing over population and stopping the encroachment of civilization. He is very guardian and protection oriented, hence the title of the shield. I think you have shown me that I need to alter his title. Beyond having to maintain alpha status he does not grand stand or try to inflate his own ego. He sees that more as a trait Lassiate would have, which irritates him to no end.

Hence calling him an overstuffed green flamingo?

And the inflatable peacock, and the dancing ostrich