This is a reupload and should be considered Revision 2.

While rereading the story for a memory refresher before working on part 2, I felt this story wasn't up to my standards. So I decided to proofread and edit the story for a reupload.

This was my first piece of writing since high school so I did expect it to be a little rough around the edges but it didn't come anywhere near my standards.

This second revision hasn't changed the story at all. I just wanted the story to flow better for easier readability and enjoyment. I also gave the characters more.. well.. character, for lack of a better word.

If you enjoyed the first revision I recommend you to read this one anyway because it's much better.

I will be writing part 2 of Mysterious Poké Ball very soon; in fact, I originally expected to have part 2 early released on patreon by Sunday of the week that I'm uploading this, but I spent a day revising the first part and have obligations for work on the weekend. So this will delay the upload date. I will try to work on part 2 to hopefully release it on Sunday but I can't guarantee an upload date at the moment.

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