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Our "poor" protagonist, a wealthy and powerful CEO, can't get any sleep. What do you get a man who has everything except a good night's rest?
A Thursday Prompt for 10/22/2009 "Insomnia"
I went to a really boring update meeting (guess what, we're in a recession and are making cutbacks, who knew?) and wrote this while being told the obvious. I actually did nod off a few times, but I hope it's because of the meeting and not the story.
A Thursday Prompt for 10/22/2009 "Insomnia"
I went to a really boring update meeting (guess what, we're in a recession and are making cutbacks, who knew?) and wrote this while being told the obvious. I actually did nod off a few times, but I hope it's because of the meeting and not the story.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Mammal (Other)
Size 101 x 120px
File Size 25.5 kB
I didn't really expect that... as this is a furry art site... he could have been a regular anthro goat... but yeah, nice twist, well played. I enjoyed the heck out of this story. Then again, I like every story with a twist and new view to the devil or god or something. Somehow it feels justified that he suffers insomnia, though. Anyway, well written. Good work, again.
Thanks, I'm glad someone saw my trick. I'm not sure how a "non-furry" would react.
Maybe one of the worst things you can give someone is everything but one thing.
He is a CEO that unfairly takes millions of dolllars from people, of course he deserves it. And, even as "the author," I'd agree.
Thanks for the comments.
Maybe one of the worst things you can give someone is everything but one thing.
He is a CEO that unfairly takes millions of dolllars from people, of course he deserves it. And, even as "the author," I'd agree.
Thanks for the comments.
This felt like the intro to a thriller or a horror movie. The sleep deprived rich guy who either goes crazy and starts killing people, or he seeks out some way to inflict harm on others to take out his frustrations. Just the vibe I got, but this could work out into something very suspenseful if played right.
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