
Just the intro to a story i'm gonna write. Please let me know about improvements, good points, bad points ect.
Hopefully i can make a good story and don't go easy on review's if its tosh let me know and i'll scrap it.
Hopefully i can make a good story and don't go easy on review's if its tosh let me know and i'll scrap it.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 577 B
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