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Gorgeous, I love the depth of field and postures.
I have a few criticisms of the fox in comparison to the skunk: his hand is a bit short/stubby and his expression seems somewhat vague and distracted.
Generally it might be worth having some foliage in the foreground too, but it's not really required.
I have a few criticisms of the fox in comparison to the skunk: his hand is a bit short/stubby and his expression seems somewhat vague and distracted.
Generally it might be worth having some foliage in the foreground too, but it's not really required.
Great use of shading.
Thumb on AK should be around the back of the pistol grip instead of alongside.
The shotgun should be higher up and into the shoulder of the skunk. The skunk is also going to trigger a malfunction with their hand blocking the ejection port.
You did a great job of drawing guns instead of impressions of guns for the shotgun and AK, so thats really cool.
It is kind of strange seeing the skunk taking a right handed shooting stance but having his sidearm being on his left leg.
I also dont see any spare shells for the skunk.
Thumb on AK should be around the back of the pistol grip instead of alongside.
The shotgun should be higher up and into the shoulder of the skunk. The skunk is also going to trigger a malfunction with their hand blocking the ejection port.
You did a great job of drawing guns instead of impressions of guns for the shotgun and AK, so thats really cool.
It is kind of strange seeing the skunk taking a right handed shooting stance but having his sidearm being on his left leg.
I also dont see any spare shells for the skunk.
Since you asked, just for future reference, the magazine pouches on the Fox's plate carrier look to be kind of small for AK-47 magazines. They should be about twice as long to be able to accommodate them. As others have mentioned, the characters aren't gripping their guns correctly.
I assume the skunk is left-handed, since he's wearing his sidearm on his left side. In that case, the skunk should be gripping the forend of his shotgun with his right hand (which would be his support hand if he's left handed), much like the fox is doing.
Those are about the only critiques I have for you.
Now on the other hand, I noticed that the fox looks like he has a good, proper shooting stance, and he's leaning into the gun (to better control it) as he should be doing, so good job on that.
Well done piece. The scene looks atmospheric and tense, like they're expecting trouble.
I assume the skunk is left-handed, since he's wearing his sidearm on his left side. In that case, the skunk should be gripping the forend of his shotgun with his right hand (which would be his support hand if he's left handed), much like the fox is doing.
Those are about the only critiques I have for you.
Now on the other hand, I noticed that the fox looks like he has a good, proper shooting stance, and he's leaning into the gun (to better control it) as he should be doing, so good job on that.
Well done piece. The scene looks atmospheric and tense, like they're expecting trouble.
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