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PLEASE READ THE CHANGELOG
Happy Holidays everyone! Hope everyone has a fantastic and jolly time, and that the new year shines bright!
Mushiness aside, here is the new Repeat update! Unfortunately due to my time in college and other life obligations, there are no "new" story bits in this update. This is more of a "maintenance" update: rewriting several scenes in early game, adding newer sprites into older scenes, and fixing story inconsistencies here and there. However, I did add a few goodies here and there that I'm sure some of you will get a kick out of. Also, I felt like it was high time I fixed up a good portion of Repeat's earlier game. My beginner writing skills back in the day cause me so much grief, I kinda cringe and die a little when rereading my old work. So basically this update is just me trying to kick younger me in the balls at tell myself to git gud as a writer.
Changelog:
-Players can now re-access Owen's old cut content before his route rewrite! This includes that Samuel lewd scene y'all keep thirsting for and probably the only reason most of y'all want to replay this. Just type in "Owen Cut Content" when Echo asks for your wish on Day 5. You will be judged thoroughly.
-3 New CG artworks for Owen's introduction in Day 1
-3 New sprites for Owen
-3 New sprites for Phillip
-Integrated Phillip, Owen, and Sissel's new sprites into older areas of the game for better character expression.
(The following are a lot of specifics, but TLDR; rewrote a bunch of scenes and tweaked others in older game areas. Most of this is to streamline the story and get rid of early ideas that I will no longer use.)
-Rewrote the choice results for Phillip's Day 1 and Owen's Day 1 options for better character development.
-Tweaked Phillip's rooftop scene in Day 1: to better fit his future character arc. Retconned his fear of heights.
-Rewrote Phillip's classroom scene in Day 2: to better fit his rebellious character progression and flows better into the Dorcas Dolores fiasco. And foreshadowing stuff.
-Tweaked Sissel's and Owen's morning scene scene Day 2: Retconned Sissel and Owen hating each other and turned it into a more frustrated friendship. They were originally going to have a "scorned lovers" arc, but this has been cut out.
-Added Euca's (protagonist) love of chocolate + foreshadowing of personal issues early on when all alone.
-Rewrote/tweaked Owen and Phillip's moping scenes after their outburst on Day 4. Owen's character reacts to problems by laughing it off and bottling up feels. Phillip's character reacts by getting angry at others and himself.
-Tweaked all of Owen's moping scenes in general to better match his characterization.
-Fixed plothole where Sissel Day 11 forgets his uniform in the dorm when it clearly says he took his uniform with him.
-Fixed plothole where Phillip mentions his "parents" despite being raised by a single mother.
-Increased Phillip's salt, sass, and sarcasm by 300% across the board.
-FYI: Y'all know that the "Save Phillip from country music hell" scene on Day 5 varies wildly depending on who you comfort and whether you side with Phillip/Owen on Day 4, right? This is the most easily missed scenes in the game, it makes me kinda sad.
-Subtly added Phillip's theme music here and there.
PLEASE READ THE CHANGELOG
Happy Holidays everyone! Hope everyone has a fantastic and jolly time, and that the new year shines bright!
Mushiness aside, here is the new Repeat update! Unfortunately due to my time in college and other life obligations, there are no "new" story bits in this update. This is more of a "maintenance" update: rewriting several scenes in early game, adding newer sprites into older scenes, and fixing story inconsistencies here and there. However, I did add a few goodies here and there that I'm sure some of you will get a kick out of. Also, I felt like it was high time I fixed up a good portion of Repeat's earlier game. My beginner writing skills back in the day cause me so much grief, I kinda cringe and die a little when rereading my old work. So basically this update is just me trying to kick younger me in the balls at tell myself to git gud as a writer.
Changelog:
-Players can now re-access Owen's old cut content before his route rewrite! This includes that Samuel lewd scene y'all keep thirsting for and probably the only reason most of y'all want to replay this. Just type in "Owen Cut Content" when Echo asks for your wish on Day 5. You will be judged thoroughly.
-3 New CG artworks for Owen's introduction in Day 1
-3 New sprites for Owen
-3 New sprites for Phillip
-Integrated Phillip, Owen, and Sissel's new sprites into older areas of the game for better character expression.
(The following are a lot of specifics, but TLDR; rewrote a bunch of scenes and tweaked others in older game areas. Most of this is to streamline the story and get rid of early ideas that I will no longer use.)
-Rewrote the choice results for Phillip's Day 1 and Owen's Day 1 options for better character development.
-Tweaked Phillip's rooftop scene in Day 1: to better fit his future character arc. Retconned his fear of heights.
-Rewrote Phillip's classroom scene in Day 2: to better fit his rebellious character progression and flows better into the Dorcas Dolores fiasco. And foreshadowing stuff.
-Tweaked Sissel's and Owen's morning scene scene Day 2: Retconned Sissel and Owen hating each other and turned it into a more frustrated friendship. They were originally going to have a "scorned lovers" arc, but this has been cut out.
-Added Euca's (protagonist) love of chocolate + foreshadowing of personal issues early on when all alone.
-Rewrote/tweaked Owen and Phillip's moping scenes after their outburst on Day 4. Owen's character reacts to problems by laughing it off and bottling up feels. Phillip's character reacts by getting angry at others and himself.
-Tweaked all of Owen's moping scenes in general to better match his characterization.
-Fixed plothole where Sissel Day 11 forgets his uniform in the dorm when it clearly says he took his uniform with him.
-Fixed plothole where Phillip mentions his "parents" despite being raised by a single mother.
-Increased Phillip's salt, sass, and sarcasm by 300% across the board.
-FYI: Y'all know that the "Save Phillip from country music hell" scene on Day 5 varies wildly depending on who you comfort and whether you side with Phillip/Owen on Day 4, right? This is the most easily missed scenes in the game, it makes me kinda sad.
-Subtly added Phillip's theme music here and there.
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So some things I noticed on the first day, early 2nd day that might need revising.
1.) When you join Phillip on the roof on Day 1, he explains his bad thoughts creeping up on him a second time. The first being when you first meet him and choose "I just sleep it off". (I didn't choose the other option, so this may just be a choice-based repetition).
2.) When you run into Phillip first thing on Day 2, you're to choose between 3 lines of corny puns. As this was made to fight back his relentless punny attacks, it now seems a bit excessive and out of nowhere, especially the responses that follow.
3.) After Sissle calls Owen a twat and storms off, the MC makes the comment "Well that went as expected." Because you changed Owen' and Sissle's relationship, it no longer makes so much sense. As far as the MC knows, Sissle said those two have been friends for a looooong time. Calling him a twat, though deservingly, seems out-of-the-blue.
I only just started, but I'm loving every change you've made!!! Especially Phillip's 300% sass upgrade!! Getting used to Owen' and Sissle's new standing will take a bit, but it looks a bit easier to argue why they'd hang out together with the MC. I cannot wait until I reach all the new changes! :D
1.) When you join Phillip on the roof on Day 1, he explains his bad thoughts creeping up on him a second time. The first being when you first meet him and choose "I just sleep it off". (I didn't choose the other option, so this may just be a choice-based repetition).
2.) When you run into Phillip first thing on Day 2, you're to choose between 3 lines of corny puns. As this was made to fight back his relentless punny attacks, it now seems a bit excessive and out of nowhere, especially the responses that follow.
3.) After Sissle calls Owen a twat and storms off, the MC makes the comment "Well that went as expected." Because you changed Owen' and Sissle's relationship, it no longer makes so much sense. As far as the MC knows, Sissle said those two have been friends for a looooong time. Calling him a twat, though deservingly, seems out-of-the-blue.
I only just started, but I'm loving every change you've made!!! Especially Phillip's 300% sass upgrade!! Getting used to Owen' and Sissle's new standing will take a bit, but it looks a bit easier to argue why they'd hang out together with the MC. I cannot wait until I reach all the new changes! :D
So because Jinny could not live she is the one who is full of second chances in my theory. Since Halley specifically wants to help Jinny. I think the Remnant is supposed to be Echo, in a way i think the wish our character made was a broad one like "make his friends happy" or something
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