someone actually read this piece of crap work! :D

Make that several. Yet again and un feigned tis not crap. you have great command of the word enough to get Poe, Pound, and Lovecraft to crap from their icy tunes, despite the awful works here. You have expressed the form of the writer well. Now from a poetic form truth be told you lack. But hell poetry is the expression of self and the human condition , and that you did more then 90% of the frostiens mopping around. My time was definitely not wasted.

Very nicely done....I agree with HelixtheFallen....tis not crap, not at all. It's very captivating and amazing, and is exactly what us writers do in our paths. You have a very, very good piece of work here.

I look forward to reading your other work.