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Yeah but.... One Mineta isn't that main protagonist so he isn't shown first and foremost in every scene, and two most people still like Mineta or think he's funny and Muko isn't really funny when she does it, with Mineta they kinda exaggerate it more. But idk that's just me I don't really see it. No offense to Dai when I say that, I don't really hate Muko, and she is kinda developing but she's like Bakugou, it's a slow development, but won't change them completely (Bakugou's angry temper, and Muko's pervertedness) it's just part of their character.
Yeah you got a point. I think that is also in part due the fact that most of the world seem completely oblivious of her perv tendency. Hell most think she is straight!(Mellow at least do so). A character trait that does not have an impcat on the surrounding world tend to lose value.
Yes you are right on being too soon to proper judge muko yet. We are just now being introduced to eventual supporting cast. Still she really can get unnerving and oddly unpleasant at times.
Oh for similar female character with high level of lesbian libido i suggest reading Murcielago manga. Main character kuroko kuromori is as perv as Muko is if not more....but she is not as naive, or nice . Beware is a bloody crazy manga, funny as hell but also with gory deaths!
Oh for similar female character with high level of lesbian libido i suggest reading Murcielago manga. Main character kuroko kuromori is as perv as Muko is if not more....but she is not as naive, or nice . Beware is a bloody crazy manga, funny as hell but also with gory deaths!
Unfortunately, if we continue with this brick wall that the plot has rammed itself into we'll never see Muko in a ring. Or worse, she'll just elude to it with a picture on Muko's phone like she did when Muko met her ring partner. We were all looking forward to that meeting and it's reduced to a phone picture.
What's the point in having these exposition scenes back to back if Muko is just going to perv out through them at all times? The question should be "Ok, Why did Skully leave Cookie?", but we're left with "Oh, all of this and Muko is once again being a perv so it completely goes unanswered." It's becoming really frustrating.
Absonultely. I really want to follow this story, but I'm so tired of seeing exposition that gives us clues that's ignored by the main character. Honestly, I'm tires of expisition all together. I signed in for exciting fight scenes, but so far have seen half of one and a street fight. I want to keep reading, but there doesn't seem to be a carrot on the end of this stick. I really don't want spoilers, I just want the plot to move forward. I don't even care that Muko is an idiot, but if she doesn't care about the expisition being provided why should we?
Thanks for reading my story. I´m tempted to explain some things, but if I do so I failed as a storyteller. Everything that should become clear should be told thorugh the story alone. I decided to tell a story with an unusual amount of exposition to arrive in an unusual amount of pay-offs.
alright then. You should keep in mind, though, that Muko is our proxy to this world. Where she's new to the world of Combalgal we're new to your world which means that as she learns new things we do too. This means that if Muko doesn't care about the information being given to her then we don't care either which makes the entire scene feel like wasted time. This story is very similar to the manage "Kenichi: World's Greatest Disciple" in that the main protagonist is new to his experiences, but is still pretty pervy, the difference is that when someone gives him exposition he pays attention to it even while being a perv. That's what asides are for. You have dialogue in a bubble confirming that the information was received and then a small comment to represent the pervy thought with a line showing who's thinking it. If you haven't read that manga I suggest checking it out. It might help a bit with your storytelling.
Damn Muko, I know Tasha is sexy and all, but would it kill you to learn more about your manager? Not everything in life is about scoring hot chicks when you pretty much have an entire career ahead of you to do it. Anyway, I am interested on Skully and why she left Cookie, especially since there is a chance that Muko will face her in the future.
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