Nagyon jo a ruha otlet!
Jo lesz jo lesz nagyon kivancsi vagyok majd a kesz verziora =)
Hatttttter *.*

Hát igen tényéeg jó a ruha, nekem sajnos nem volt ilyen ötletem, csak annyit thetek, hogy követem az eredeti, kisseb modosításokkal.

Az tetszik a ruhaban, hogy bar az eredetit hasznalod refnek megis olyan LZs =)

think it is looking great...always so much detail in your art

I must make details. Precious details.

and it makes your art so wonderful

*nibbles on* no. doesnt taste like chicken.
darn you D= you make my part feel so small and stuff if you add a bg to your part!
all the stuff you point out as error are minors that i wouldnt care to much about XD other than her weapon. <.<
its not a double barrel shotgun/whatevera.
but aww. you made her tail look almost cute <3

Oh ok. Than it must be chicken with pepper flavor. =3
Don't feel small. Anyway it's part of the "just have fun" part of the deal. What can I say I liked to draw that tower for you. You deserv to have Serenity around you. You just need to decide if you'll wanna destroy the city or save it. I may draw a hollow army beside you? ;)
AS I said I cut her a few places before I inked her. To be exact her arm what hold the spetergun was way shorter than the other. There for I cut it in two places and made it longer, her tail is almost brand new, the first try was to tick, like a normal tail. Her chest... let's just say I expanded it a bit while inking. (Yeah I know "males") Her legs what was drawn was wrong, and I since her feet was off the page I drew that yesterday to make her stand on something. You can't see those since they are built in the ink by now, and there are still many thing left to take care of.
Oh it isn't that's fine since it original had one barrel I just have to turn of a layer, and push it back a little.
It wont be cute when I draw back her yaw again. After a little refit. Does she have a tongue there? Just cuz I think she has.

nu! dont destroy the city, shes a good girl! but someone else could have ruined it if its full of hollows <.<
her tail. atm it doesnt have a tongue, but i am thinking about.
i want to draw her again sometime soon and thinking about changing the tails teeth back to this http://www.furaffinity.net/view/326481/ or something similar(possibly something similar caue those looks a bit rediculus XD). atm its just doesnt feel intimidating enough. i want it to look like that when it does bite something/someone, you are sure it will take a big bite of it. Right now it only looks like once it bites it will stay stuck on you until it manages to rip of some flesh.
so atm you have alot of freedom with the tail :3

Those are no hollow down there. That is the faint grid for the making the background. That grid helps me to set up the environment. I finished that already, and it was a tough work.
Hmm that there should be shark teeth's. =3 In this case I added a toungue, just to cover up th empty space. I realy would like to avoid the feel that it's like a tube with teets.

Oh and now comes my setup wizard again, wich will guide you trough the drawing process to personalize your picture. (I do this all the time so be nice and do it to me).
The one barrel is reestablished and all the red marks are earesed. Coloring is on the way.
I may drop something up to you now. I know you like to hide your singno in the works of yours all time. So I'm not realy a big bleach fan since it's not really played in my country, just the first part of it repeated thousand of times, when they save the princes (Rukia) from the castle. =3 But that was enough to me to notice that the captains have their marks on they clothing. You thinking what I thinking? That is a perfect chance to make your char belong to you. Currently I'm to tired to desing where should your signo be place so I sleep one on it, and I hope you'll solve that problem to me while I doing that, and write back to me.
More interactivity question is that you may chose the day time. Sunset, noon, night with full moon, half moon, no moon, cloudy, rainy, etc. (It's time to chose Mr. Freeman. Again.)

They dont have a mark on their clothing O.o not that i have noticed.
Make my char belong to me...dont she already belong to me?! <-<
You dont need to add my sign anywhere on her as its your artwork and not mine, and people should know who she belongs to.
day time. sunset or night with full moon :3

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a.....ul-Society.jpg It may happen that I didn't used the right word for it. I was talking of the things in red.
Yes it belongs to you, I just brainstorming.
Ok thanks I will do.

woot! never noticed those before. but enigma has no place for such a sign on her outfit i would think.. well one could fit at the corner of the "cape" but no idea what ranked group she would belong in. I havent been putting much thought about her story really. other than shes a Bleach Shinigami XD;

On her back. =3 Which is not visible in this case. And to tell since the cloth on her back is half black and half white the sing should be also should be b and w colored. (I calculate, maybe if the white apron don't covers her back, over the black wear than I didn't said a word.) Anyway her wear is a spectacular one for sure.

her clothes is just the same as it is on the front. the cape only covering half of her and the black top only covering her neck. but you already know that X3 but yeah. if she did have a sign it would have been black and white.

Impressive I say. You really chosed well with this character, I'm entertained a lot, with this one. I wish this would go to all the works I do.
And meanwhile I did thinked out a sing to be placed.

I had an idea. =3 A really good one. I can't wait to see what will you think of it. Need to finish fast.

jol nez ki eddig!

Megint elkurtam a kezét. Nálam ez hagyomány. Na meg még szerencse, hogy össze hasonlítottam, különben let volna pofára esés a végén.

Thats an amazing costume she is wearing

It's not my design, I just followed Hy's original wear. And it looks good.

fail? you're doing damn right awesome work, and so is hy. Artists always want to keep getting better, but there's no need to think your current art is bad.

I know she's not a fail, one is perfect, so I just toughed I show here mine fails to prove.