WIPs 1 and 2 are not uploaded, but I have them on hand to share with people as necessary.

After learning how to properly design a character in both artistic and writing, I set to work on redesigning my book's MC. The head is what looks the most peculiar right now with the most linework progression on the sword. This is also what he's going to look like at the beginning of the book. Just tell me what you think in the comments.

Note for posterity or for the future:
If the completed version of this piece is already up, then make critiques based on that as I try to get my pieces peer reviewed during the process so grievous errors are corrected prior to any of the more intense stages.