Well you filled in your troublesome gaps well. The added descriptions lessoned your flow, tis hard to find balance, because they added an extra flair and depth.
Still if this is it, it comes down to your point. What is the message your are conveying to your audience. Your world is till open with youthful Eva, nothing happened that perpetuated the story to anything of higher value.
You have a world here and you are keeping the gates of your world down.
A lot of potential is being wasted. Perhaps thought I am misunderstanding your rhetoric and jumping the gun still, ending this here is throwing much away.

Rhetoric countenance examples
"Hey check that out, what is that," the young boy nudges a body on the shoulder and points at the new comer. ""Its an animan dumb ass our schools being desegregated." "My daddy says their freaks like animals", a third chimes in. "Hay pussy," the first calls chucking a rock. The young kitten turns and looks there is a sick crack........

"Nothing extinguishes the spirit of holy humanity," a megaphone blares over an array of barbed wire fences and concrete buildings. The fox holds his ears and howls in aggravation his gun at his side. He turns at his panther buddy in the trench. "Darn Gaian fundamentalists, believing they are the only pure descendents of humans," he grumbles. The panther just lights a cigarette and nods gazing at a flag blowing in the wind an image of along forgotten girl flapping against the pole.

Sorry for that, but yes you have ton of possibilities to explore, angles you have a very powerful world with great character building potential. You should use it.

Oh, don't think this story is over, far from! I completely forgot to add that to the Author's Comment section... This was just an intro for the scenario and for Eva. I'm planning on making two, three, maybe even four more of these following Eva through her time in a Gaian school. Probably more, since Eva is rapidly becoming one of my favorite characters in my stories and I'd love to get her through high school... But the story was becoming too long to reasonably keep in check, so that's why I ended it there.

Anyways, the next two stories are going to focus on her Freshmen year (the third might, too), and from there... well, I'll decide when that comes. I might skip to her Senior year after that, and then go into the working world... but first things first, gotta get her through Freshmen year. I have some earth shattering plans for her (at least in the story's world.), and I could never forgive myself if I didn't go through with it.

That is very good then. Yeah your authors comment was confusing on the subject so I yet again jumped the gun, I apologize. I am very happy you have considered to keep writing this out. For it can defiantly become something most wondrous. Best of Luck.

Thank you much, and don't worry about it. I was unclear about it, so it was reasonable for you to jump a out at me. Anyways, now you know, thank you very much for your support, and hopefully people will read the uber-long post under your first one so I don't have to explain that this is the first of several stories n.n;;

Is this the whole thing or just the final chapter???

This is the whole things of the first story o.o;; And yes, there will be sequels n.n So no worries on the cliffhanger ending.

WOOT