Unlike the other poem I just posted, this one I wrote literally yesterday (and was the big inspiration to finish the story. Yay!). Little brother came home and told me that he had to write a poem for his Creative Writing class, and I thought it would be fun if he brought in his and mine. Really needed to write something that wasn't involved in my story... Anyways! He's got the class tomorrow, so here's to hoping his teacher enjoys. And it's my hope that you enjoy it too n.n
No, this is not foreshadowing for the Eva in Breaking Down Walls. I needed a short, two syllable name, and this is what popped into my head. You can blame Nightwish for that one, since their song 'Eva' was the basis for this depressing poem o.o;;
No, this is not foreshadowing for the Eva in Breaking Down Walls. I needed a short, two syllable name, and this is what popped into my head. You can blame Nightwish for that one, since their song 'Eva' was the basis for this depressing poem o.o;;
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True; though I'll still have a special place for Tarja; she could bring out so much from the music; and she had so much POWER; heh ^^
I did enjoy Amaranth quite a bit though... And Dark Passion Play's Instrumental versions of their songs are just.. amazing ^^ I hope that Annallene grows on me as much as Tarja did ^^
Nightwish was one of those bands that got me to seek out music again; it was so new and wondrous; It could have been calling to my Celtic heritage that was majorly unknown until just recently; as I found myself fervently seeking them out and so many others like them.
I did enjoy Amaranth quite a bit though... And Dark Passion Play's Instrumental versions of their songs are just.. amazing ^^ I hope that Annallene grows on me as much as Tarja did ^^
Nightwish was one of those bands that got me to seek out music again; it was so new and wondrous; It could have been calling to my Celtic heritage that was majorly unknown until just recently; as I found myself fervently seeking them out and so many others like them.
Haha, well, I heard Annallene first, so... *shrugs and laughs* I've always appreciated her works. It took me a bit to get used to Tarja's singing... she's much more opera style and carries the style, but it was difficult to appreciate it until I stopped comparing the two and focused on their individual advantages: Tarja carries the power of classical opera singing, and Annallene's control over her voice is something to be appreciated all to it's own. Both of them are wonderful singers, and both of them sound great with the band.
MegaUpload's a free file-hosting site; where I send a file and get back a unique link. I send the person I'm sending the file to the link; and through that link; they download the file. It's a rather convenient middleman site ^^
It's fast; free; and requires no sign up or anything ^^ It's how I used to have to distribute some of my vids; like the ones that YouTube wouldn't let me upload (For example: "Be Human"; "In Loving Memory") And it's quick too; I'll prolly have a link ready within minutes ^^
It's fast; free; and requires no sign up or anything ^^ It's how I used to have to distribute some of my vids; like the ones that YouTube wouldn't let me upload (For example: "Be Human"; "In Loving Memory") And it's quick too; I'll prolly have a link ready within minutes ^^
Here you are then ^^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FMGW44HO
After you follow the link; it'll ask for a short Captcha (like 3 letters and a number); then click "Download file". On the next page, just wait for the countdown on the bottom of the two links to reveal "regular Download"; and you can get it from there ^^
Soon; you'll be jammin to it ^^
<Jams out>
Ever Felt away with me?
Just once, that all I need.
Entwined in finding you one day...
Ever Felt away without me?
My Love; it lies so Deep
Ever Dream of Me?
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FMGW44HO
After you follow the link; it'll ask for a short Captcha (like 3 letters and a number); then click "Download file". On the next page, just wait for the countdown on the bottom of the two links to reveal "regular Download"; and you can get it from there ^^
Soon; you'll be jammin to it ^^
<Jams out>
Ever Felt away with me?
Just once, that all I need.
Entwined in finding you one day...
Ever Felt away without me?
My Love; it lies so Deep
Ever Dream of Me?
^^ And I'd be glad to send them all; but that's 1GB worth of mp3's XD I might cram a good mix in a zip and send em or something.... like
Beauty of the Beast
Feel for You
Bare Grace Misery
Bless the Child
Over the Hills and Far Away
Come cover me
and
Nymphomaniac Fantasia
I think that's like 100 MBs worth or so; unless of course you've already got a bunch of these ^^
Beauty of the Beast
Feel for You
Bare Grace Misery
Bless the Child
Over the Hills and Far Away
Come cover me
and
Nymphomaniac Fantasia
I think that's like 100 MBs worth or so; unless of course you've already got a bunch of these ^^
And; as promised ^^ I placed 10 songs in a zip ^^ total was around 70 MBs ^^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QEHZHLQ7
The added ones are:
Moondance
Dead to the World
and
10th Man Down
Just in case you didn't have those ones too ^^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QEHZHLQ7
The added ones are:
Moondance
Dead to the World
and
10th Man Down
Just in case you didn't have those ones too ^^
It's on my DA; here's a link to it
http://silverfurredkage.deviantart......to-be-71330103
Oh! And I was able to scrounge up that other comic about Sailing and such I was talking about by Jay Naylor; I zipped up what I found for ya ^^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=LCQLENMN
"New Worlds" was it's title.
http://silverfurredkage.deviantart......to-be-71330103
Oh! And I was able to scrounge up that other comic about Sailing and such I was talking about by Jay Naylor; I zipped up what I found for ya ^^
http://www.megaupload.com/?d=LCQLENMN
"New Worlds" was it's title.
Huh... well, on the poem, I really think the subject is deep and touching... The rhyme scheme is a little odd, though, making it hard to read. The rhythm is a bit unsteady, and it's like each line was meant to A) get the words in and B) rhyme, with no thought to the cadence. Though I'm not sure whether I'd call it a bad thing... the subject itself is unsteady, like the poem, so maybe a steady cadence would have detracted from the poem.
Thanks ^^ I really appreciate the input ^^
The rhyme scheme was mostly just trying to match the ending two words of each line; I was just randomly inspired one day to write that. The story behind it, actually; is an artist I had followed for a long time; Bliss GreyCloud; had been going through a rough time; one in which she had felt stricken by the person she wanted to be with. She had gone quiet from the net for months; and it kinda bugged me... above all else; I would have liked to have just talked to her... to get to know the woman behind the art... Because her art was quite inspirational...
I used her pain to create a metaphorical story of a man fighting to 'restore' the one he loved to the status in which he 'knows' her to be. (hence how she's whole and graceful in his dreams; yet scarred and beaten in the living world)
Wings; as we all know, can be a metaphor for freedom; but I was using it specifically for the freedom of one's emotion. As the poem progresses; I was trying to show the idea of "Here's a woman, who is beautiful; yet has been mistreated and misunderstood so long that she is afraid to be who she is inside. She has also built up a lot of defense mechanisms because of her mistreatment. The man tries to convince her to open up; and to trust him, not assume he will be like all the rest."
I think the line I'm most proud of is:
Earthbound, Life's barbed chains hold and stay thee.
And hounds, like men, spin 'round and betray thee.
I was illustrating the pull and weight heartbreak and negative emotions can have on someone in the first line there; but the second was my clever way of hinting to the reader the CAUSE of that distress; and poke an insult at them as well.
As for Bliss GreyCloud: She has since removed all of her Art from the Net. I was actually THERE when that happened on DA...
However; this story does not have a sad ending ^^ I was able to archive a lot of her past works; and created my first-ever Artist Tribute video.
Here is a link; if you would like to see it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjMNd8CFQlI
Three weeks after I had uploaded the video; I received something amazing... Bliss GreyCloud; who had been an internet recluse; dropped by and Thanked me for making the video... I was so happy ^^ That inspired me to make more videos; even to this day...
The rhyme scheme was mostly just trying to match the ending two words of each line; I was just randomly inspired one day to write that. The story behind it, actually; is an artist I had followed for a long time; Bliss GreyCloud; had been going through a rough time; one in which she had felt stricken by the person she wanted to be with. She had gone quiet from the net for months; and it kinda bugged me... above all else; I would have liked to have just talked to her... to get to know the woman behind the art... Because her art was quite inspirational...
I used her pain to create a metaphorical story of a man fighting to 'restore' the one he loved to the status in which he 'knows' her to be. (hence how she's whole and graceful in his dreams; yet scarred and beaten in the living world)
Wings; as we all know, can be a metaphor for freedom; but I was using it specifically for the freedom of one's emotion. As the poem progresses; I was trying to show the idea of "Here's a woman, who is beautiful; yet has been mistreated and misunderstood so long that she is afraid to be who she is inside. She has also built up a lot of defense mechanisms because of her mistreatment. The man tries to convince her to open up; and to trust him, not assume he will be like all the rest."
I think the line I'm most proud of is:
Earthbound, Life's barbed chains hold and stay thee.
And hounds, like men, spin 'round and betray thee.
I was illustrating the pull and weight heartbreak and negative emotions can have on someone in the first line there; but the second was my clever way of hinting to the reader the CAUSE of that distress; and poke an insult at them as well.
As for Bliss GreyCloud: She has since removed all of her Art from the Net. I was actually THERE when that happened on DA...
However; this story does not have a sad ending ^^ I was able to archive a lot of her past works; and created my first-ever Artist Tribute video.
Here is a link; if you would like to see it:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjMNd8CFQlI
Three weeks after I had uploaded the video; I received something amazing... Bliss GreyCloud; who had been an internet recluse; dropped by and Thanked me for making the video... I was so happy ^^ That inspired me to make more videos; even to this day...
^^ Thanks
I didn't realize until later just how fitting that song was that I used. It's always been one of my favorites; and such an epic song to end the epic game of MGS1 on.
Since I made that tribute; I've found myself taking on more ambitious projects; like my series of Wrongside Tributes and Milestones... My first foray into AMVs; and the most recent tribute to StolenGeneration and RestoredGeneration (SG/RG).
I have links to all handy; if you ever need a good video to watch ^^
I also have links to my other writing; although I'll admit I have only posted about 1.4% of all of it ^^
I didn't realize until later just how fitting that song was that I used. It's always been one of my favorites; and such an epic song to end the epic game of MGS1 on.
Since I made that tribute; I've found myself taking on more ambitious projects; like my series of Wrongside Tributes and Milestones... My first foray into AMVs; and the most recent tribute to StolenGeneration and RestoredGeneration (SG/RG).
I have links to all handy; if you ever need a good video to watch ^^
I also have links to my other writing; although I'll admit I have only posted about 1.4% of all of it ^^
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