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This is a story idea that me and a group of friends decided to work on. I am not Kaitou himself but the writer of his story. So here goes my shot at a preview. And Also sorry for the multiple question marks they are supposed to be quotation marks but for some reason they pop up as ?
Anyway here's the preview.
A girl who is shunned for who she is and betrayed by her allies
A fox who is seeking revenge for his village's destruction
A knight with a heavy burden.
Three very different people who will change their world in ways they could never imagine.
Anyway here's the preview.
A girl who is shunned for who she is and betrayed by her allies
A fox who is seeking revenge for his village's destruction
A knight with a heavy burden.
Three very different people who will change their world in ways they could never imagine.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 105px
File Size 47 kB
I read the story and I think it's going to be really cool animated. I agree in giving it a soundtrack (I have already composed something), but I need to know how are the music aspect supposed to look like (something epic, rock style, something like a movie score, etc...). It would help a lot if you could describe it to me, or am I free to use any style that comes to my mind?
Some Critisism:
1 - The pursuit scene just rocks and will work perfectly in the story.
2- I think Shalimar should be a bit less rude with other people and more sarcastic instead.
3 - The dream sequence is a bit dull. Dream sequences in stories usualy have more intense emotion attached to it. I suggest you could put something on it that scares Shalimar or leaves an empty gap at the end of it.
bye
Some Critisism:
1 - The pursuit scene just rocks and will work perfectly in the story.
2- I think Shalimar should be a bit less rude with other people and more sarcastic instead.
3 - The dream sequence is a bit dull. Dream sequences in stories usualy have more intense emotion attached to it. I suggest you could put something on it that scares Shalimar or leaves an empty gap at the end of it.
bye
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