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Here it is, and with 4 hours to spare before class. I've got to stop torturing myself like this. @_@
Category Artwork (Digital) / General Furry Art
Species Mouse
Size 945 x 900px
File Size 544.1 kB
hmmm This came out lovely and I can see you've put a lot of time into this. However if I could nit pick it. I feel as if you can push the perspective by going softer on the edges. I also feel as if the piece would read more romantic if instead of the water fading into blackish navy it faded into more of the deep magentas or Burgundy's that are in the kimono of the white mouse. Also I feel as if the fish would sit more in the water if their line work and color was slightly distorted like the ripples above them. *hugs* keep up the good work.
I really like this a lot sara and it's good to see you coloring things. XP
Also being nitpicky- I still think you can push the linework (size of the line) on the mice. The head of the male is perfect imo. Also, you have such drastic shading on this piece, but I think because of that you need to push the darks directly under the feet to make them look more grounded. Right now, the shading onthe lily pad almost goes lighter to the edge of the feet and the reverse needs to be happening.
That's my two cents. I really like Afi's suggestions too (R U COMING TO GRADUTION d00d?! >_<;;;;)
Also being nitpicky- I still think you can push the linework (size of the line) on the mice. The head of the male is perfect imo. Also, you have such drastic shading on this piece, but I think because of that you need to push the darks directly under the feet to make them look more grounded. Right now, the shading onthe lily pad almost goes lighter to the edge of the feet and the reverse needs to be happening.
That's my two cents. I really like Afi's suggestions too (R U COMING TO GRADUTION d00d?! >_<;;;;)
EDIT: by linework here I mean in the following areas the size might look good increasing:
ear of the female mouse where the lily pad is behind it
bottom side of female moouse tail and foot
top front edge of lilypad mouse are standing on
the front lilypad almost in darkness
also just thought of this... coloring your lines! XP
ear of the female mouse where the lily pad is behind it
bottom side of female moouse tail and foot
top front edge of lilypad mouse are standing on
the front lilypad almost in darkness
also just thought of this... coloring your lines! XP
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