Err... We surrender, don't look at us with those mean... errr... goggles? :P

The muzzle lacks lips... and the hair on the front is like seemingly going up on itself, way over the goggles?

I love the outfit though, skin-tight clothes for the win! ^^ She also got a nice pair of... errr... guns, guns, I was gonna say guns... /p

The little keypad on her left hand is nice, I like it! Her lightsaber thingie looks dangerous, though, perhaps with a bit more glow to it it would have looked better. Less brightness to the center, and a much paler color on the edges, but with more luminosity to it, would have made it more dangerous looking.

Her ears are not aligned! The left one seems to be lower than the right one, way lower, if you follow the line drawn by the upperside of the goggles. Makes her looks a bit weird.

Ok, gonna stop playing the art critique before she gets angry and decides to use her weapons on poor lil me... ^^

Hahahaha!!

Trust me, I love critique.

In truth, I spotted those things, but I was too lazy to fix them. They are just something I need to keep in mind for future works. This was just a way for me to fool around with coloring, considering I need to learn digital in order to make anything of myself. The real problem is I need a tablet computer in order to do anything of real worth. Simply cannot draw with a regular tablet.

There is a lot wrong with this drawing. For one, the lines are too thick in spots, the anatomy is off at a couple points, there is no real focus for lighting, etc. All stuff to keep in mind for next time.

I'm good at spotting my own faults, am I not? xD

Yes, you are! ^^

I will admit not really getting the difference between a regular tablet and a tablet computer...

And, sicne you lvoe critique, I'll be happy to keep providing them, and help you progress toward perfection! ^^

Much thanks. <3

Hey there DarkRadiance! I really liked how this turned out! Color always brings the image to life, hehe!

Tamara has already pointed out a lot of critique's I noticed, but I do have to comment that the background is a tad too bright. I think darkening and desaturating it slightly would pull the character more towards the viewer, which of course, is important! She's what we're here for, after all!

Drawing with a tablet just takes practice. It's a bit awkward at first, but you'll eventually get the hang of it, hehe! Just keep it up!

Again, excellent work! Nicely done!

I was worried a little about the background, but I wanted something that was extremely eye-catching. However, in hindsight, it does seem that desaturating it slightly would help bring the character out more. I should have seen it.

Thanks for the tip. <3

In all honesty i don't see anything wrong with this pic, it looks perfectly fine the way it is. The stern look on her face helps to interpret how serious she is, and the blade has a slight glow around it as it should. =) i say two thumbs up mate

Thanks a bunch!

Truthfully, I didn't see anything wrong with the blade. It was designed based on the Phantasy Star Universe style of photon blade.

*nods* yeah that's what I figured ^^