The Nothern city of the land of Vilvanek, used to be built and only allowed to Salva'oreks, a species known for their repulsive acts of pride. They love to shove their ''superiority'' up every non Salva'orek species just to feel even more higher being than them.
This was before the Last ditch effort of the witches of Xiriday in the west, casting a powerful spell opening portals to multitude of dimension and dragging any life form there into theirs. The most resilient species came from an unknown world where deadly creatures and violence is a routine, where nightmares happens when you are awake and not asleep.
They were led by a cruel Leader named Desse, a female Nevrean who worshiped a higher being in her world known as the Brutal general. With her confused yet determined troops they invaded the city of Sorkon, killing anyone who did not surrender or was in their way, no matter their age or status in society, the survivors were forced into slavery .
The Salva'oreks almost all vanished that day as they were forced to run their tail between their legs, Their ego roughly beaten yet standing as even being refugees they still claim to be better than other race.
Years later the new leader of Sorkon, Desse gave birth to a daughter, a daughter with a golden glowing eye. She thought she was blessed for her action, giving the child some of the genes from the Brutal general still fighting in their homeworld. She named her Maldesse due to looking so much like her own mother.
When Maldesse grew old enough to read and talk, Desse taught her everything about her homeworld and the tales of the general, her belief and her deeds, she was so amazed by her even if the stories contained dark acts against innocent victims, to the point even Maldesse herself began believe she was perhaps a reincarnation or an heir to her lifeblood.
The mother was first please to see her child willingly following her footstep wanting to one day become general of the army Desse controlled, but soon began to fear her own daughter as she was able to manipulate ice and water magic. There was no magic in the parents blood and in their origin world, this power at first seemed tame but the more she grew the more powerful it became.
TO the point where she caught Maldesse committing torture on prisoners, her face is bliss as she heard their screams of agony, Realizing she would become too dangerous if she kept going on the path, Desse tried her best to lie about the stories she told her, About how the brutal general was nothing but a fairy tale and she shouldnt commit these kinds of action anymore.
It was a bitter lie in Maldesse ears as she simply stared at her mother with disgust, even threatening to kill her if she was serious about the tales, not its authenticity but if she really tried to convince her own daughter to not commit the same deeds she witnessed her mother do for years. When she saw the fear in her eyes, Maldesse dragged her into the royal throne and demanded for all the royal guard to be witness of this act of treason.
Desse cried as she plead her daughter to stop following the path of unnecessary violence as she admitted to be tired of the bloodshed, saying how it would be better if being in this new world to stop their ways and attempt to fix their mistakes. But no one stood to support her, instead she only felt an horrible sharp pain followed by a burning cold as Maldesse froze her limbs and shattered them to pieces, preventing any bleeding as she wouldnt allow her mother to die so easily.
As she stared her own child in fear, Maldesse created an ice dagger and cut off her None mutated eye, removing the eye of her mother, removing her lineage to prevent being seeing as a weak link like her own mother. Desse pitiful attempt to stop her creation only created a dire future as the army grew stronger and more violent, to the point where she was worshipped as a god by her own people.
Multiple statues were crafted for Maldesse as army were now known as the Crimson tears soldiers. Patrolling the streets day and night, they make sure every citizen is following her new rules and that no ill words about her is said. those who dare express an act of free speech, joking about their leader, will be horribly tortured and executed by her army, who would die gladly for their general and all jump off a cliff if she did, an army turned into a cult like mindstate.
Hopefully it made sense as i am trying to change and fix my lore with Maldesse and her army. And hopefully the art is decent enough as i tried to use no lines, but yeah... I'll stick to using lines from now on
As for the 4 soldiers marching, up left is an agudner, then a male nevrean holding a bolt action rifle, a female Nevrean and sergal down right. The guns are rare and all bolt actions, i dont want to make it too advanced tech to the point everyone has guns.
art belongs to me
Vilous species belongs to
mick39
This was before the Last ditch effort of the witches of Xiriday in the west, casting a powerful spell opening portals to multitude of dimension and dragging any life form there into theirs. The most resilient species came from an unknown world where deadly creatures and violence is a routine, where nightmares happens when you are awake and not asleep.
They were led by a cruel Leader named Desse, a female Nevrean who worshiped a higher being in her world known as the Brutal general. With her confused yet determined troops they invaded the city of Sorkon, killing anyone who did not surrender or was in their way, no matter their age or status in society, the survivors were forced into slavery .
The Salva'oreks almost all vanished that day as they were forced to run their tail between their legs, Their ego roughly beaten yet standing as even being refugees they still claim to be better than other race.
Years later the new leader of Sorkon, Desse gave birth to a daughter, a daughter with a golden glowing eye. She thought she was blessed for her action, giving the child some of the genes from the Brutal general still fighting in their homeworld. She named her Maldesse due to looking so much like her own mother.
When Maldesse grew old enough to read and talk, Desse taught her everything about her homeworld and the tales of the general, her belief and her deeds, she was so amazed by her even if the stories contained dark acts against innocent victims, to the point even Maldesse herself began believe she was perhaps a reincarnation or an heir to her lifeblood.
The mother was first please to see her child willingly following her footstep wanting to one day become general of the army Desse controlled, but soon began to fear her own daughter as she was able to manipulate ice and water magic. There was no magic in the parents blood and in their origin world, this power at first seemed tame but the more she grew the more powerful it became.
TO the point where she caught Maldesse committing torture on prisoners, her face is bliss as she heard their screams of agony, Realizing she would become too dangerous if she kept going on the path, Desse tried her best to lie about the stories she told her, About how the brutal general was nothing but a fairy tale and she shouldnt commit these kinds of action anymore.
It was a bitter lie in Maldesse ears as she simply stared at her mother with disgust, even threatening to kill her if she was serious about the tales, not its authenticity but if she really tried to convince her own daughter to not commit the same deeds she witnessed her mother do for years. When she saw the fear in her eyes, Maldesse dragged her into the royal throne and demanded for all the royal guard to be witness of this act of treason.
Desse cried as she plead her daughter to stop following the path of unnecessary violence as she admitted to be tired of the bloodshed, saying how it would be better if being in this new world to stop their ways and attempt to fix their mistakes. But no one stood to support her, instead she only felt an horrible sharp pain followed by a burning cold as Maldesse froze her limbs and shattered them to pieces, preventing any bleeding as she wouldnt allow her mother to die so easily.
As she stared her own child in fear, Maldesse created an ice dagger and cut off her None mutated eye, removing the eye of her mother, removing her lineage to prevent being seeing as a weak link like her own mother. Desse pitiful attempt to stop her creation only created a dire future as the army grew stronger and more violent, to the point where she was worshipped as a god by her own people.
Multiple statues were crafted for Maldesse as army were now known as the Crimson tears soldiers. Patrolling the streets day and night, they make sure every citizen is following her new rules and that no ill words about her is said. those who dare express an act of free speech, joking about their leader, will be horribly tortured and executed by her army, who would die gladly for their general and all jump off a cliff if she did, an army turned into a cult like mindstate.
Hopefully it made sense as i am trying to change and fix my lore with Maldesse and her army. And hopefully the art is decent enough as i tried to use no lines, but yeah... I'll stick to using lines from now on
As for the 4 soldiers marching, up left is an agudner, then a male nevrean holding a bolt action rifle, a female Nevrean and sergal down right. The guns are rare and all bolt actions, i dont want to make it too advanced tech to the point everyone has guns.
art belongs to me
Vilous species belongs to
mick39
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