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This is John Lobo's point of view in the Sore Loser series. The narration follows him throughout the story and there are 6 more points of view to come.
Character(s) Involved:
JohnLobo and 
Tolstoy.
This is John Lobo's point of view in the Sore Loser series. The narration follows him throughout the story and there are 6 more points of view to come.
Character(s) Involved:
JohnLobo and 
Tolstoy.
Category Story / Vore
Species Wolf
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 16.4 kB
The story is great, but one little technical note: I notice some slipping back and forth between present- and past-tense. (example: "He said,"/"He says,"). It's something I noticed myself doing until recently without realizing it, so I just thought I'd bring it to your attention.
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