
Last Guardian Vol 6- Return to the Innocent... NEED HELP
This will be the first part of 3 of the last vol of my story Han'i the Last Guardian. Been trying to get the ending out for a year now and finally it hit me in a dream. I will end the story as well as I know how. This is a rough draft I just finished typing it.
I really need some critz on this story more then anything I want to make this part of this story as good as I can. I want the reader to feel what Han'i feels. Please help if you can.
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Vol 6- Return to the Innocent:
Storyline-
Han'i's baby Melissa is born at last, but as his heart finally feels peace he must decide her fate. As he looks into her eyes for the first time he knows what must be done, the sacrifice of his future with his child for her and those like her to live without fear.
In the coming days he will face his destiny, but what will the out come be? Will Han'i find the strength to let his little girl go?
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 53.5 kB
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