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For your joy, the next pages will be in spanish! ahahah, sorry but making them talk in english seems weird so... if you have a complain about it write in the comments, i will not read it
-Are you alright?
-Yes, dad, i'm alight! Please, stop asking me...
-I just... i'm worried for you, Alejandro
-Woff... yes, i know...
-But now it's over, so...
-You friend tried to call you
-They were curious, they're worried
-Drug dealing, vandalism, aggression...
-Attempted murder...
-Hey, Ivan will stay in prison for a lon...
For your joy, the next pages will be in spanish! ahahah, sorry but making them talk in english seems weird so... if you have a complain about it write in the comments, i will not read it
-Are you alright?
-Yes, dad, i'm alight! Please, stop asking me...
-I just... i'm worried for you, Alejandro
-Woff... yes, i know...
-But now it's over, so...
-You friend tried to call you
-They were curious, they're worried
-Drug dealing, vandalism, aggression...
-Attempted murder...
-Hey, Ivan will stay in prison for a lon...
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Just to help you, (I don't want to be disrespectfull, but I believe it's better if the grammar is right.)
Few corrections: accents in Spanish are like this: " á é í ó ú " this other ones: " à è ì ò ù " "â ê ô..." are not found in Spanish
2nd panel:
2nd balloon "preguntarme" (when pronouns go after the word they get attached to it)
4th balloon if you want to say "Yes I know" it would be "Sí, lo sé"
4th panel:
2nd balloon: "They were curious, they're worried" mmmm we don't really say that someone is curious in this case we say something like --> "Tenían curiosidad", literally "They had curiosity" So in that panel "Tenían curiosidad, están preocupados" or just "Estaban preocupados" would work better
5th panel:
1st balloon: "Tráfico de drogas, actos vandálicos, agresión"
3rd balloon: "Hey, Iván irá a prisión por un lar..." (In the case you wanted to say "Hey, Iván will stay in prison for a lon...[g time]" )
Few corrections: accents in Spanish are like this: " á é í ó ú " this other ones: " à è ì ò ù " "â ê ô..." are not found in Spanish
2nd panel:
2nd balloon "preguntarme" (when pronouns go after the word they get attached to it)
4th balloon if you want to say "Yes I know" it would be "Sí, lo sé"
4th panel:
2nd balloon: "They were curious, they're worried" mmmm we don't really say that someone is curious in this case we say something like --> "Tenían curiosidad", literally "They had curiosity" So in that panel "Tenían curiosidad, están preocupados" or just "Estaban preocupados" would work better
5th panel:
1st balloon: "Tráfico de drogas, actos vandálicos, agresión"
3rd balloon: "Hey, Iván irá a prisión por un lar..." (In the case you wanted to say "Hey, Iván will stay in prison for a lon...[g time]" )
in spanish when you say "estaban curiosos" it generally means they looked cute (like kids with disguises looking cute or small objects/animals that make you go "awwwww")
Probbly "Estaban preocupados, querían saber" sounds more natural (imo)
"curiosidad" is more used when you see something and you come closer to see, to investigate like you saw a poster and you walk closer to see what it is about.
Probbly "Estaban preocupados, querían saber" sounds more natural (imo)
"curiosidad" is more used when you see something and you come closer to see, to investigate like you saw a poster and you walk closer to see what it is about.
First, the characters ere of Cuban origin. You won’t ask an English father-son characters to speak each other in Chinese if they live in China. Husky does this because is more fitting for the characters. Husky himself has made a cameo in this comic and he spoke Italian.
Second, Husky is ITALIAN and even if he has improved his English in all these years, he could’ve simply left all his work in its original version. But he had the defference to translate it to English because it is the most widespread language.
Third, Alejandro already had a experience with his cousin Fernando. Read ‘Cousins’ written years ago. Even if it could be your kink, Husky has never depicted Alejandro to have a reversed Oedipus complex. He had his first sexual experiences with an adult when he was younger (indeterminated age) and he (Alejandro) admitted later it was a mistake. Alejadro’s dad is bisexual but he has kept this a secret. He could’ve told Alejandro about it in the first two pages of the comic, and rape his own son in the couch (I don’t know why people find that appealing. I think a father having sex with his son is disturbing, nonetheless that theme keeps appearing over and over, it might be because of people with ‘daddy issues’) but he didn’t. He heard his son coming out, accepted it, made his son feel comfortable with his sexuality and made him know nothing would change between them and he would love a be there for him AS A FATHER no matter what. Diego’s relation with Alejandro has been really good and normal so far. I don’t know why would anyone want to screw it with incest.
Second, Husky is ITALIAN and even if he has improved his English in all these years, he could’ve simply left all his work in its original version. But he had the defference to translate it to English because it is the most widespread language.
Third, Alejandro already had a experience with his cousin Fernando. Read ‘Cousins’ written years ago. Even if it could be your kink, Husky has never depicted Alejandro to have a reversed Oedipus complex. He had his first sexual experiences with an adult when he was younger (indeterminated age) and he (Alejandro) admitted later it was a mistake. Alejadro’s dad is bisexual but he has kept this a secret. He could’ve told Alejandro about it in the first two pages of the comic, and rape his own son in the couch (I don’t know why people find that appealing. I think a father having sex with his son is disturbing, nonetheless that theme keeps appearing over and over, it might be because of people with ‘daddy issues’) but he didn’t. He heard his son coming out, accepted it, made his son feel comfortable with his sexuality and made him know nothing would change between them and he would love a be there for him AS A FATHER no matter what. Diego’s relation with Alejandro has been really good and normal so far. I don’t know why would anyone want to screw it with incest.
Okay, well...
1. You're not making your story better by changing the language in the middle of this predominantly English comic and NOT translating it for english readers. Even what I said (just now) is stupid because this isn't even a film where something like that would be a logical way of communicating a different language through subtitles, and what not. It's a comic where you always HAVE to read the dialogue in conjunction with the art and panels. Consider this hypothetical on the manga "Berserk": imagine that all the white characters in the manga all spoke English and this is communicated blatantly through the dialogue being written in THAT SAME language. But the middle eastern characters in the manga spoke in Arabic "just because" and you cannot understand a word their saying because you do not understand the Arabic language (and those characters are pretty important to the plot, as well, so it would be pretty annoying to have to go out of your way to translate all the Arabic dialogue for your ability to comprehend a language that you are probably never going to have to encounter in your consumption of media. It's like having a rug pulled out from beneath you and ending up on your ass, dazed and confused, unable to comprehend whats happening, and the only explanation is "just because".
2.I know Husky92 is Italian, but he can still write English dialogue, either way. Also, what's "defference"? (Nice spelling)
3. I've read "Cousins", and if you could not tell, this entire series is just porn with some drama thrown in for added effect. If Husky92 is willing to write a comic where the fifteen-year-old protagonist has an incestuous relationship with his nineteen-year-old cousin, than he has the ability to put Alex and his dad into an incestuous relationship, as well. I can see why you would think that angle would jeopardize the relationship that was already established, because that's just your opinion. MY OPINION is that I want to see Alex fuck his dad because I'm into that sort of thing. Everyone is an asshole and a hypocrite, including myself. You and everyone you know is an asshole and hypocrite because we have different opinions and we may passionately defend or criticize these things based solely on our own learned biases.
1. You're not making your story better by changing the language in the middle of this predominantly English comic and NOT translating it for english readers. Even what I said (just now) is stupid because this isn't even a film where something like that would be a logical way of communicating a different language through subtitles, and what not. It's a comic where you always HAVE to read the dialogue in conjunction with the art and panels. Consider this hypothetical on the manga "Berserk": imagine that all the white characters in the manga all spoke English and this is communicated blatantly through the dialogue being written in THAT SAME language. But the middle eastern characters in the manga spoke in Arabic "just because" and you cannot understand a word their saying because you do not understand the Arabic language (and those characters are pretty important to the plot, as well, so it would be pretty annoying to have to go out of your way to translate all the Arabic dialogue for your ability to comprehend a language that you are probably never going to have to encounter in your consumption of media. It's like having a rug pulled out from beneath you and ending up on your ass, dazed and confused, unable to comprehend whats happening, and the only explanation is "just because".
2.I know Husky92 is Italian, but he can still write English dialogue, either way. Also, what's "defference"? (Nice spelling)
3. I've read "Cousins", and if you could not tell, this entire series is just porn with some drama thrown in for added effect. If Husky92 is willing to write a comic where the fifteen-year-old protagonist has an incestuous relationship with his nineteen-year-old cousin, than he has the ability to put Alex and his dad into an incestuous relationship, as well. I can see why you would think that angle would jeopardize the relationship that was already established, because that's just your opinion. MY OPINION is that I want to see Alex fuck his dad because I'm into that sort of thing. Everyone is an asshole and a hypocrite, including myself. You and everyone you know is an asshole and hypocrite because we have different opinions and we may passionately defend or criticize these things based solely on our own learned biases.
1. Husky already stated what the dialog meant because he thought about people like you who don’t know or are not willing to learn another language and wrote the translation on the page description.
2. Deference: Noun. Respectful submission or yielding to the judgment, opinion, will, etc., of another.
3. Cousins is more the sex canned and served for people to jack off. It show how Alejandro grows and matures discovering his sexual identity with someone who would help him, not only use him like the crocodile. Someone closer to his age. Everyone had thoguth at least once about having sex with a cousin. You are free to have your ‘daddy issues’, but here you’re clearly trying to pervert Diego and Alejandro father-son relation just to fulfill your twisted kink.
2. Deference: Noun. Respectful submission or yielding to the judgment, opinion, will, etc., of another.
3. Cousins is more the sex canned and served for people to jack off. It show how Alejandro grows and matures discovering his sexual identity with someone who would help him, not only use him like the crocodile. Someone closer to his age. Everyone had thoguth at least once about having sex with a cousin. You are free to have your ‘daddy issues’, but here you’re clearly trying to pervert Diego and Alejandro father-son relation just to fulfill your twisted kink.
1. My first argument still stands here, you haven't changed anything. You are telling me to take myself out of the comic to read the translation. It's like having to go digging through the directory in the back of the book to understand whats going on.
2.Good to know. Thanks.
3. I only read this comic for porn. You may read it for the story, and there is nothing wrong with that, but I have to say again, "Everyone is an asshole and a hypocrite!" Everyone has their own opinions on things and that's fine. We could keep debating about this all day, if you wished, but clearly our opinions on this comic and our tastes in porn do not align, so it would be a fruitless fray of repeated statements bull.
2.Good to know. Thanks.
3. I only read this comic for porn. You may read it for the story, and there is nothing wrong with that, but I have to say again, "Everyone is an asshole and a hypocrite!" Everyone has their own opinions on things and that's fine. We could keep debating about this all day, if you wished, but clearly our opinions on this comic and our tastes in porn do not align, so it would be a fruitless fray of repeated statements bull.
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