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Wonderful art by  Dragonnetstorm

People were confused about:
1) Who was attacking who (most people assumed the robot was charging everybody else)
2) The age group of the people doing and receiving the joke (most people assumed this was a teacher with some high school kids)
3) The "butt plug" joke being there at all (most people thought that was either an indentation on the seat or just something flat on the seat itself)

Thus i asked these changes, so that the comic was changed the least possible, while conveying the initial joke:
1) The extra dialogue line on Sc0rpia to tell people what Sc0rpia's doing, should remove the "about to charge" impression.
2) The rewording should tell people those are assistants not school kids
3) The red stamp on the butt plug covers anything that might be NSFW while also letting people imagine worse stuff than it is, thus driving the attention to it and also making it (hilariously) "safer for work". (it actually looks dirtier this way to me)

Original text follows:

The antics of 2 college students and the robot they built, and a college teacher annoyed by their idiocy.

Today we see the infamous... BUTT PLUG. butt plug joke obviously warrants mature rating.

This is going to be a veeeeeeery long comic and we're only at page 02 of the intro chapter which is "just" a bunch of robot-inspired jokes made so that people have a laugh while we learn to know about the characters.

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