An admittedly last minute assignment that I totally thought I had another week to work on. As something I labored on for a day I'm modestly pleased with the results.
YARGH! Gotta work on my habitual procrastination!
YARGH! Gotta work on my habitual procrastination!
Category Artwork (Digital) / Miscellaneous
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 488 x 232px
File Size 185.4 kB
Yeah, that's quite a bit better, speed-wise. :)
Now I can at least crit!
It doesn't look very heavy, because he doesn't have to pull the box over his center of gravity. Since he's holding in front of him like it's featherweight the entire time, it makes it look like he's either acting, or the box is possessed by an outside force that pulls it away from him towards the table.
Here's a cheat though - if he's holding the box there, and it *is* heavy, he probably would put his tail out to counterbalance - which means you can probably get away with simply changing the tail to fix the balance. :)
Your drawing is far better executed than any animation I've done though, mine wiggles like mad. :|
Now I can at least crit!
It doesn't look very heavy, because he doesn't have to pull the box over his center of gravity. Since he's holding in front of him like it's featherweight the entire time, it makes it look like he's either acting, or the box is possessed by an outside force that pulls it away from him towards the table.
Here's a cheat though - if he's holding the box there, and it *is* heavy, he probably would put his tail out to counterbalance - which means you can probably get away with simply changing the tail to fix the balance. :)
Your drawing is far better executed than any animation I've done though, mine wiggles like mad. :|
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