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This is the long awaited, and unedited, chapter 2.
Any comments on changes or ideas are welcome. Please comment.
Any comments on changes or ideas are welcome. Please comment.
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 31.3 kB
Well the tense issue is still apparent but less, so keep up the practice as this being another draft. Your ideas and story telling is always so exciting. Didn't expect a single thing, just kept flowing with the plot and building strong characters. Keep it up because just like Hyashi I can say it stokes me more then a stout as well.
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