I like this very much. The emotion and descriptions are great, as usual! :) I hope they succeed, I really do.

Thanks, Neko. I'm testing the waters with some original works here.

I plan to continue this one (or at least do more in this world). This tale hasn't gotten much attention yet compared to its Bolt & Penny brethren, so I'm very encouraged you got caught up in the story. ^_^ *wags*

Interesting world, you have great talent to present a whole new world, as well as it's characters and conflicts in very little text (something I have never managed).

I'm truly interested, these kind of epic quest are very much my cup of tea, and if you decide to continue, I'll be right along.

*wags* Thanks for the praise, Tod. What I've found helps in conveying a new world to readers is to only tell them what is relevant to the moment you are putting them in. I've buried my readers in back story before also, so don't worry. :D

I've had the idea bouncing around in my head for a while now. I'm currently thinking up how to continue this story, but you will certainly see more of this world in the future.

So, take an amazing artist like vampireprincess and then add an amazing writer like tempo, then sit back and watch your brain explode because there's just too much awesome in the same place. How my house survived this experience is a complete mystery!

Thank you, Jouster. I really like VampirePrincess's art and so when she put out a call for a story, I was eager to jump on board. I've had a fantasy setting simmering away for a few years, so this was a good chance to get a story about it.

Glad to hear that your brain has un-exploded enough to allow you to type. :D Hope you enjoy the next one!

oh wow! great story hon!

Glad you liked it, catgirl! I'm pretty proud of it.

I spent most of tonight writing the third part, when I wasn't digging out cars or feeding horsies. :D The first draft is almost done.

*purrs* kewl! now i gotta read the second part

ive decided to follow more on FA since i read to fast on SF and al the people im watching need time for new material so im gona read all your storsy to pass the time then some other peoples storys adn just keep going really hehe good start i cant wait to crack on and read the rest :D

Awesome! Feel free to throw out some comments as you go--this series doesn't get enough love! :)