
My first fur comic, colaboration with
ryuumajin - kun
To Ryuumajin : Kok teks nya beda seeehhhhh...? swt dah

To Ryuumajin : Kok teks nya beda seeehhhhh...? swt dah
Category All / General Furry Art
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 598 x 850px
File Size 171.1 kB
well lionus had grade this one... i will do it also... but like when i was in a school i was cheap with grades i will be here also... since only god, if there is one is perfect the 20 in a 0 -20 scale is out of question... and since there is always place for improvements... 18,5
great comic both of you
great comic both of you
Deheheheh, makasih mau collab dengan gua. Gua seneng banget :3
Yang beda cuma dialog terakhirnya doank kok. Coba perhatikan dengan yang baru gua kirim. Kalo lu kesannya si serigala ngincar si gede sejak awal, kalo gua sih kesannya, "Yah, Putri Duyung gak dapet, Paus pun Gak masy'alaaah!" =3=
Yang beda cuma dialog terakhirnya doank kok. Coba perhatikan dengan yang baru gua kirim. Kalo lu kesannya si serigala ngincar si gede sejak awal, kalo gua sih kesannya, "Yah, Putri Duyung gak dapet, Paus pun Gak masy'alaaah!" =3=
Okay okay!! X3
I said to him
"Deheheheh, thanks a lot to have a collab with me. It's really a great pleasure to do the collabs with ya
The difference is just the punchline. In your comic, it's like the guy inituates to hit on the big dude from beginning. In my version, it's like he would be happy to get either of the girl or the dude instead"
I said to him
"Deheheheh, thanks a lot to have a collab with me. It's really a great pleasure to do the collabs with ya
The difference is just the punchline. In your comic, it's like the guy inituates to hit on the big dude from beginning. In my version, it's like he would be happy to get either of the girl or the dude instead"
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