and...this gotta be one of those crinngy things I do.

>>♦THE ARTWORK

>Type : Daily Painting - from the Letsa finish those non-finito Skitchis

Title: Silent Battle
Or (My Daily Fight)

>Duration
♦Original sketch done on 2019-02-06, dat is fibrira Sitxh
♦ 4 to 5 hours

>Explanation

This i a sketch i did to prove myself if i could do more dynamic poses

>♦STORY

The meaning

the dood is this dude.
The silencer is my drawing tablet

the situation is the next one
im looking to move through the hallways
this is life,
and i may find the enemy in them,
which is sorrow, depression and distress

but i use my drawing tablet to defend myself against them.
and earn a peace that will last briefly
as i continue to move forward through each hallway.
everyday.

until i find my way out 
to a destination that i dont know.

>Inspiration Sources:

♦ A view inside my mind.

> about the technique

♦ Use of a dry splaterry, jittery and very cringy brush

> about the species

if the shells that are inhabited by ghosts would have a name.
this would be mr cringy.

>♦GRIPE

ummm.....
i love the smell of pain in the morning.

>♦CRITIQUE

i think overall rendering is okay

i have trouble looking at shapes and color
Perspective and composition is kind of lost.

but what really worries me, are the cringy paws, pose, and the anatomy.

>Recommendations

How do you draw digitigrade characters, looking realistic
with a physically correct dynamic pose, and at the same time
avoiding the elements of cringe. that is very hard to ressolve
or at least for me.

>♦Personal Judgment, Score

Overall Quality  7/10 or 8

The Feel of expression 7/10
Technique 8/10
Anatomy 7/10
Shading 8/10
Construction 6/10
Lighting 8/10
Colors 7/12
Perspective 5.9/10
Creativity 6/9
Style 7.5/10
Composition 6/10
Shapes 6.9/10
Stroke Flow 7/10
Design 5.5/10

♦ Negative values

Ugliness 5/10
Boringness 2.5/10
Level of self-cringeness 9/10

v01 19/03/2019

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