very pretty kitty

Thanks!

Still have any idea what you might want me to do with your character if I draw her?

anything would really be ok...simple nude, or lingere, or bondage...whatever you feel like...but is only if you want to...

Well I still have to look over the applications for the final slot before I make my decision. I'll let you know when I do.

oh...ok...

Wow perfect colors

It isn't so much the color as the shading. It's all in the Lumination and Shade layers.

oh ok, it looks great anyway

Thanks much! <3

Love her eyes ^.^

Yeah... I tried something new with them to add some degree of detail to the iris. I like how it turned out, myself.

They are indeed wonderful to look into ^.^

That they are. And considering  tamara is one hell of a critic, I had to do my best on this.

He he ^.^

And you did a wonderful job

I'm one hell of a critic, really? Well, I'll take that as a compliment then!

See below for my critic!

very nice! you did good on the cloths!

I thought so. I used a lot of the watercolor tool in SAI to pull it off. Still dont like the jeants much, though. I hope to one day figure out how to get cloth texture.

I'mn a sucker for detail. x.x;

*nods* testures can be a pain...

I'm stealing that jacket again.

Glad you like pink jackets. xD

And butt hugging jeans. :o

Hell, I love butt-hugging jeans. Fortunately, I have the butt for them, so I can get away with it. <33

I have the butt for it also, BUT

I have large thighs .__.

xD
Even better. <3

You like large thighs? WOAH WHAT?

xD

:p

Really though? o:

Of course.

Who doesn't? :o

:O

I dunno.


It's all muscle on mine though. =w=

WOW I am so glad i am watching you... you just keep getting beter and better!

I did say that I would. It seems to be a trend for me, getting better and better with each work that I do simply because I learn more each time I draw.

Yeah thats how i am too... I am doing a really quick one of carrot

Have you see the one i just did for kix?

I have not.

I'll go look now.

Lovely picture Dark, you did an overall good job on it. *Hugs* Love to have Tam depicted in everyday situation, looks like I am going on a trend. ^^

Anyway, let's go for the more detailed critic:

- I can still see some of the sketch lines, even if they're faded, they are still noticeable, and creates some sort of a shadow, especially around the ears.

- Why are the lines looking so pixelated? They looked much betetr and smoother in the sketch.

- I love the eyes. I really love the way you drew and colored them, that faint glow is wonderful, and the general form of the whole eye is very good. Great job you did on the eyes.

- The shading and lightning on the hair is nice, but should be a bit smoother, especially the lightning. Though, I won't really complain having golden hues in my hairs! ^^ It is still very nice.

- Whiskers! Yay! ^^ That's all! :P

- The nose is distorted, and the lips lack any real definition. Or any real existence. Which gives a quite neutral expression to her face, despite the awesome job done on the eyes.

- Nice job on the could of vapor of her breathing, but you should definitely work on your snowflakes! :P

- Love the pink hoodie! Great lightning job, and it looks almost like the real thing. Good job! Texturing jeans is tricky, so, no worries there, it will come in time. Love them being butt-hugging though! ^^ It's really something Tamara would wear. ^^

- You managed to follow the description of my character, and draw her as I described her, and, for that, you deserve a hug, as some artists seems to have a bit of a problem following directions to draw a char as simple as mine. *Hugs*

- Good job on the fur, the technique you used gives a very nice effect.

In conclusion, overall, you did a nice job, especially considering that this was a free commission. ^^ Thank you again for choosing my idea for one of the free slots you offered.

Keep on practicing and getting better, and you'll surely become a very talented artist. I'll make sure to commission you again in the future, when I have some spare money again! ^^

You are very right on those points. I was worried about the lines... Being pixellated as they are. I know what caused it, but I couldnt figure out how to fix it. My apologies.

As for faces, noses, and lips, I'm still working on facial anatomy. It will take time and work, but I'll get it. <3

If you havent noticed, I'm still working on adding detail to my shading techniques. Right now it's just watercolored and blurred. Still need to work on it, and I plan on doing so.

Thanks a bunch for the critique. I wish you would give me critique like this all the time. xD

For the pixelated lines: tried looking through google for a fix for whatever caused it?

For the facial anatomy: I am not worried that you'll master it in time. You've progressed quite fast already! ^^

For the shading: you are still doing a quite good job with the watercolor and blurr, you'll improve with time.

As for giving you critiques like this, well, I'll strive to do it as often as I can, if that can help you. ^^ I'm just usually horribly busy, so, I do not have that much time to sit down, study a picture in details, and write a critique. But, I'll try to do it as often as possible just for you! ^^

Thanks, much.

Oh, I want you to look over my commission pricing and tell me what you think of it. Would you pay that much for something from me?

You can find the link in my profile.

Going to look now. ^^

k. <3