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Dusk's New Family (Backstory + Age Regression)
Wowie, this one took a while to write. 13.6k words, probably one of my longest stories ever. This story gets a snippet of Dusk's past, as well as introduces his former tyrant father, and his new family, the loving Mommy Phantasma and Big Sister Glimmer.
Depending on how well this does will determine whether I continue writing additional family stories, or if I go back to the shorter stories, that just regress Dusk in a variety of ways. People have told me they wanted to get his family story, so here it is. I will still be writing the shorter stories, the success of this only determines my priorities.
Hope you all like this, sorry for my long break. I might be finally starting to get back into regular writing. We'll have to see.
Depending on how well this does will determine whether I continue writing additional family stories, or if I go back to the shorter stories, that just regress Dusk in a variety of ways. People have told me they wanted to get his family story, so here it is. I will still be writing the shorter stories, the success of this only determines my priorities.
Hope you all like this, sorry for my long break. I might be finally starting to get back into regular writing. We'll have to see.
Category Story / Baby fur
Species Pokemon
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File Size 76.2 kB
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Whew! Just finished, it took a while but I think it was worth the read! I really liked Dusks past here, short and simple but sweet ^^
I also liked the two sides story at the beginning too, character's were built well and admittedly got me excited when both sides began to cross x3
The story overall was really adorable, some nice pacing (and more importantly) interactions and scenarios were tons of fun to read through
It would be really nice to see what happens with dusk after this, and how his new found family is doing. Even if you choose to do other stories, then it doesn't really matter since I know they too will be fun to read x3
I also liked the two sides story at the beginning too, character's were built well and admittedly got me excited when both sides began to cross x3
The story overall was really adorable, some nice pacing (and more importantly) interactions and scenarios were tons of fun to read through
It would be really nice to see what happens with dusk after this, and how his new found family is doing. Even if you choose to do other stories, then it doesn't really matter since I know they too will be fun to read x3
Loved it. Super cute and nice to get to know more about your characters. I enjoyed the character portions of the story, really led me to getting invested in the story itself. Also liked how the regression is slow at the beginning before picking up pace towards the end and told completely from Dusk's point of view. Very good story!
A great, cute and loving chapter. I'm sure little Dusky will have lots of fun and happy moments while growing up with his new family. I personally would like to see more cute moments with Dusk and his family.
You said, Dusk's nightmares and situation with his father is based upon yourself. I hope you are doing much better now and are being happy. *Hugs*
You said, Dusk's nightmares and situation with his father is based upon yourself. I hope you are doing much better now and are being happy. *Hugs*
I'm not really into forced regression either, that's why I read these stories like this. I just enjoy more stories where everyone gets what they deserve/want for the most part. There's also a fine line between being tricked and forced into something when it comes to fantasy. Tricked implies there are rules (sometimes unfair ones) that are broken, where forced is just someone imposing something.
Just finished. Wow, what a good story. Your work always keep me close by waiting for more. Aaaaa... little Dusky is so happy now. It was fun to see both Glimmer and Phantasma work with his mind getting him to think that he is actually a baby. I can not wait for more of your work to come out, keep it up my friend. And be sure to keep Galaxy close.
i hope this becomes like a series or something :) would be interesting to see more of this kind of stuff :) Dusk is such a cutie with his mommy and big sister <3 they would definitely defend and protect him <3 who wouldnt protect that little cutie <3 the story is really well done.. lots of character traits subtly placed in there. A good pace for the story and chapters. Exceptionally well done. 100/10 review from me <3
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