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Only critiques I have to offer on this one:
1) The glass looks quite odd, as if the handle itself was affixed crookedly on the mug. I can't tell if he's got his fingers behind the mug around the handle or around the glass central portion. Seeing so much of the bottom of the mug implies that it is tilting away from the viewer, but the highest point of the liquid in the mug is the portion closest. (It should lay flat to the horizon, since it's a liquid, unless it was in motion and sloshing.)
2) The vanishing lines of this image feel very aggressive, that's a lot of background vanishing at awfully close distance.
1) The glass looks quite odd, as if the handle itself was affixed crookedly on the mug. I can't tell if he's got his fingers behind the mug around the handle or around the glass central portion. Seeing so much of the bottom of the mug implies that it is tilting away from the viewer, but the highest point of the liquid in the mug is the portion closest. (It should lay flat to the horizon, since it's a liquid, unless it was in motion and sloshing.)
2) The vanishing lines of this image feel very aggressive, that's a lot of background vanishing at awfully close distance.
The vanishing lines = the angle of the lines you use to send things further back in the shot off into the horizon. (In this case, how steep the angle is of the ceiling and floor edges meeting towards the middle in the back.)
http://mathworld.wolfram.com/images.....ective_750.gif explains this in simpler visual terms. :)
http://mathworld.wolfram.com/images.....ective_750.gif explains this in simpler visual terms. :)
Sure can! :)
I've put up the visual critique on this here: https://imgur.com/a/HCgRHDh
There's a great little tutorial on vanishing point perspective for interiors, here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LokKlwpdGeA
I've put up the visual critique on this here: https://imgur.com/a/HCgRHDh
There's a great little tutorial on vanishing point perspective for interiors, here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LokKlwpdGeA
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