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Category Artwork (Digital) / Vore
Species Digimon
Size 999 x 1227px
File Size 1013.1 kB
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I love that picture it looks good.
But I know that critique mostly helps artists to improove and to be honest the only thing that i think you need to improove in that picture is between the water and the mouth.
Its not a straight line. your tongue is not flat so the water should go a bit like a w shape around the tongue? Hope you get what i mean. But that rly is the only thing that I can see right away that would need improovement. Other than that the picture is a masterpiece ^w^
Hope I could help a bit~
But I know that critique mostly helps artists to improove and to be honest the only thing that i think you need to improove in that picture is between the water and the mouth.
Its not a straight line. your tongue is not flat so the water should go a bit like a w shape around the tongue? Hope you get what i mean. But that rly is the only thing that I can see right away that would need improovement. Other than that the picture is a masterpiece ^w^
Hope I could help a bit~
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