thanks !!

Congrats on finally bringing this to a close! You're def one of the best stuck-themed artists in the community, and its great having you're talent around. Now I'm just crossing my fingers your next stuff involves canines of some sort... ;D

thank you for your kind words FenrirKar , means a lot to me
glad i could entertain you even if sharks are not really your thing XD

it s been a while since my last attemp at drawing a dog or wolf , and i d love to make more so, at some point in the future , it s going to happen for sure :)

Wow~. That was awesome, man! So well done in every way! Well drawn, well shaded, well paced, and fantastically fat! You did something fantastic with this, and I'm very happy for you! Congratulations, and great work! I'm impressed~!

thank you for sticking arount till the end and for your very kind review !!
i m really happy i ve manage to impress you :3

i really hope you re going to enjoy my future works as well !

I loved this serie a lot <3

i m very glad you did <3<3<3

Lol great comic very fun seeing it unfold even if it took a while

thank you Ian , and thank you for stickin around since the very beginning !!! <3<3<3<3<3

Thank you! This was a fun ride.

Now I want sushi.

thank you for reading it all !!

yeah im hungry too , do you know of any "all you can eat" we could try out ? XD

I think the series was awesome ^^ and frankly its one of several pieces that makes me want to experiment with stuck scenarios (so long as their fat or inflation based)

thank you very much <3<3
yes ! do it !! stuck scenarios involving fat character getting fatter are lots of fun XD

XD Well I'll try and think up one or two then ^^

This was quite a fun series~

thanks for reading and thanks for enjoying it <3

This was GREAT. I hoped he would continue to get BIGGER and eventually become a blob that fills up the ocean! And he continues to get BIGGER forever! But great job on this man. I LOVED it.

glad you like it !
ahahah , though it was better to make it stop at some point , but one day i may experiment with one those "unlimited hunger" sequences i see a lot around FA !
thanks for sticking around <3 <3

I sure did like it!
And I hope you do someday. x3
And no prob.

Loved the comic, but I feel the ending was a little flat. Idk, I was hoping for a bigger grander ending if you ask me. Loved it either way. I just hoped maybe one day coming back with maybe some alternate endings maybe? (Plz?) Either way loved it and your works as well. So I can only wish the best and hoping to see more comics from you in the future. :D

thank your for reading my comic and giving me your thoughs <3 <3
i understand , i see that some people prefer when characters grow much bigger!
i saw sequences where character grew until they reached size of planets !!
out of curiosity : what kind of ending would have been ideal for you ?

Well I'd be not the best to decide such things in that regard, mostly Because I take after the kind of crowd that enjoys a "Mr. Cresote" (from Monty python's meaning of life,) type finale, where the main course before the climax follows a losing struggle and remorse/regret for eating such a large (and yet seemingly endless supply of schools of fish,) following a bust out of the rock formation where the crystal seemingly goes into overdrive for several panels, stopping reasonlessly a peak, where a false hope seems to spark in the shark as if he outdone the crystals magic, when from out of no where a fish, (no doubt one from the joke panel seen earlier,) arrives from out of nowhere in a confused daze as it swims randomly about before accidentally colliding with the sharks mouth, forcing him to swallow, and tear the whole house of cards apart in a large explosion of seemingly undigested fish. To avoid upfront unsettling gore, one can allude to shark's sudden explosion from a ocean surface shot, as a fisherman on a fishing boat is complaining about a low catch this morning to another crew member, (nearly on the verge of defeat,) when suddenly a large blast of water in front of them shocks him away from the thought as it appears suddenly as fish seem to fall from the sky on top of their ship and nets, in wicked awe and astonishment.

Well... at least that's how I'd end it. Not many people are into prolonged vores with indigestion and overeating being their downfall, but I don't think I'm alone here when I was wondering about the shark breaking free of the rock formation and becoming bigger at least.

Now personally, I'd be more than willing to financially contribute to mayhem put that into a reality. However someone like myself is currently a bit out of the job right now, and I need to hold onto my remaining $<200 to get more tools for my job and my PC workstation, and as I'm currently running off a budget of fuckall, and nothing, I unfortunately can only leave the suggestion of a direction to take it with, don't get me wrong, I'd appreciate it regardless if you were to take my suggestion into consideration, (regardless if it's for this or something else,) but unfortunately for this month or more I have to be really tight about my expenditures, and as much as I wish to support my favorite artists as best I can in anyway possible, I simply cannot afford to donate the money for your considered time unfortunately. I really must apologize for that. I can only hope that I can back on contracts sooner than later before the month is over to actually go back to a regular income, but times are hard right now, and I'm stuck in the rut area I am in till the end of the month when some family will be able to pool enough to ship me back homewards. So not trying to get some apathy from anyone here, I'm just trying to be real with you, I like the work you do, I'd commission if i could afford it, but right now I'm kind of stuck in a financial rut for some time till I can get work again, but I really do appreciate your curiosity and my opinion on the matter, I can only wish you the best either way. Thanks.

thank you for sharing your idea with me !

i must say, while i prefer to keep my characters alive (if i ever try drawing popping i will go for something not gory and not lethal i think) i find the scenario and the timing you described very effective and funny !
i ll keep this in mind when i come up with future comics, thank you again !! :D

Now don't get me wrong I'm not a blatant gore fan for the sake of gore, I just personally find it most effective when given scenarios for vore, inflation, weight gain, (or any of that combined or mixed in,) that just like regular stories the stomachs/bodies of the predator have a beginning/end in a sudo realistic manner. (Never been a fan post disposal however, and I find a plain blob of fat for the conclusion seemingly a bit dull personally.) Like for the premise of this story it can easily open itself up to a conclusion that I described do to the context of the premise involved. I'd say you'd get a similar conclusion from me if the objects ingested were one of those strange space age 3 course meals in a grain, (Just add water!); It's just here the gem is creating live creatures so there's more room for tomfoolery live prey rebellion.

In terms of how you choose to execute it is your choice and creative insight either way, as there's several directions you can take to the climax that doesn't necessarily have to be gory or lethal to your characters. I think bodbloat created a good compromise for such a personal conundrum with his recent concept for the "latex suit of holding," (or whatever it's called,) so there's clear room for ideas on achieving the same outcome with lesser the fatality either way, but I do appreciate your attention and curiosity either way. I understand such preferred outcomes like mine is a path less traveled, but it's not every day when we get a narrative that would easily lead to such an outcome, personally speaking. I can only hope to wish you the best either way in terms of trying to inspire something at least, and thank you for your time to read these comments, of mine. (I know they can be a bit wordy I do apologize about that.) Thanks.

no worries, i really enjoyed reading everything !!
you gave me a lot of sweet inspirations , i ll keep everything in my mind and hopefully improve ! thanks again <3

Aw, really hoped he'd get out, but still, great work! ^^

he will come out , eventually ..
.. it will take A LOT OF TIME though XD

thank you for reading all the comic !!! <3

Oh no! He's gonna poop himself in there! We need a demo team, pronto!

No problem! ^^

I thought he was gonna keep growing until he burst out of the cave!
Didn’t expect the massive influx of fish to force out the crystal! Clever! 👍
Can’t wait to see what you come up with next.

ahahah , thank you !
i though that a rock cave would have been much stronger than a lot of fish piling up , so i decided this was the more realistic outcome
thank you for reading my work until the end !!! <3<3<3<3

Aww, he's so cute. I wanna go there and take care of him forever. Or slowly chisel the cave walls until it collapses and free him. Either way is fine.

that s so sweet , i m sure he would appreciate your help <3

Uhu! After so long, you finally made it! I'm so glad one of your first comic has ended! And what end indeed! It was really good to compare howyou improved, yet kept the overall feeling from the first pages!
Wish to you the best for your upcoming comic projects and hope to see this fat sharp again!

thank you so much , yeah i changed my drawing style so much compared to the first page , it was a struggle to keep a consistend artstyle XD

My goodness, that was an incredible comic! I absolutely ADORE the this sort of scenario with a predator bites off way more than they can chew...or rather gain and the karma-driven punishment that comes with it! All of that happen while the predator turns into a helpless blob of blubber~<3

Thank you for illustrating this comic, it's been a blast!

i really like this kind of scenarios too , espetially if kept light hearted <3

and thank you for reading it all !!

Wow, this was an awesome story! I would've loved every bit of it, had I been in that spot.

Slight flaw I noticed (although I don't mind too much): Going based on the 2nd panel of page 11, the hole with the spawn crystal was opposite of the entry/exit. How did he manage to turn around for his head to pop through in the end here when he struggled so much just to move over to the crystal?

thank you for checking it out , and thank you for the feedback !!! <3<3

if you see at page 17 the shark is already facing the exit (the hole with gem is behind him) , i made him turn around between the panels of page 17 , while it was still possible even if with some effort XD
he s pretty far from both holes in the last panel of page 17 , that s because i imagined he would ve struggled a lot and needed a lot of room to turn around 180° , maybe i should ve illustrated that to make it clearer !!

hope my explanation was somewhat understandable XD

Yeah, I could see him (trying to) turn around to make one last attempt at escape after experiencing the gem's effects. It'd make more sense for there to have been a reason to turn around than just....well, "he happened to turn around".

Then again, the hole is pretty high up and just out of reach. Maybe after grabbing the crystal, he spun around as he slid back down to the bottom. Doing this one wouldn't require additional content to explain this...."happenstance".

Whatever your explanation is will be up to you. But great work on the story, nonetheless. It's a shame it ends here, but maybe this can open up more ideas for future comics/sequences.

i like these idea , i ll try to make a little more detailed and coherent narration for the next comic , my biggest problem with this one is that i didn t really plan out things before starting , but i m trying to lay everything down before drawing now .

thanks again for the feedback !! <3

This was a fun comic. I do love big sharks more now. n..n

thats fantastic !!
fat sharks needs more love and attentions !! <3 <3 <3

You may be right n..n

I just came across this and hooooh wow I loved it. He gets so big, and those big cheeks... Mmf~

awww , thank you for reading through this old comic <3

Is it weird that I would love to as an alt ending where he did manage break through the cave and continue to get even fatter? XD

not weird at all :3