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the start of my most recent story
Comments and suggestions are appreciated
Thanks!
-Cassius
Comments and suggestions are appreciated
Thanks!
-Cassius
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 2.1 kB
Well not much to say as a excerpt for its shortness, but seems interesting. Due to shortness it was also hard to see character development, it is a common cahtc-22 of using first person though where character depth is lost. Still, your dialogue was strong, and the excerpt end was captivating. Best of luck with the rest.
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