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Alrighty, guys, it's ready. A week of writing, after days upon days of refining this story, it is finished!
The story is a "kinda" sequel to a one-shot story, found here: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/43.....ecial-delivery (Don't need to read it to know what's going on, just gives context to how she became a potion maker.)
The general premise is this: Gabby, after gaining the ability to make potions with relative ease, comes up with a plan to get the Idol of Boreas from the Abysmal Abyss. She does so by mixing up a potion never made before, using it to give her the strength needed to climb down and up, hopefully with the idol in one piece.
And that's about it. While it has muscle growth, muscles, griffons and such, there's no questionable content. Maybe a swear word, but nothing too bad. So unless you dislike swearing words, it should be ok.
Warning: Story is very large. Roughly 9500 words large. Get popcorn.
Yes, she is within the legal age in the story. I mean she got a job as a mail carrier in the show, she has to be over 18 in the show as well.
Gabby © Hasbro
Next part can be found here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/34133225/
Category Story / My Little Pony / Brony
Species Gryphon
Size 120 x 75px
File Size 168.2 kB
Usually, when fanfics have internal narration (i.e., the main character talking to themselves) it comes across as cheesy, cliche, or downright awkward.
You were able to script Gab so it felt natural- normal self reflection and discovery.
Kudos to you for breaking the mold!
You were able to script Gab so it felt natural- normal self reflection and discovery.
Kudos to you for breaking the mold!
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