Well first off, I think that your cartoony style is amazing! I don't think there is any thing that i don't like

as far as what you could do better, i don't know, i think that "doing things better" comes with practice so just keep on drawing! so i don't think there is any thing specific that you need to work on, your style is already pretty cool

like i said love the style, i don't hate any thing about it :D

Thank ya for answering! I figured that not everyone wants to commish this style of drawing when there's so many other (similar) styles folks would rather pay for, hence my on/off concern XP